Reverse Coda (PG-13) Mick/Beth

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Aww, AussieJo, and diane31, thank you. This was one of my first stories, born out of a conversation in the writers thread back then. It's one of my babies. Des helped me because I was much less apt at finding the right english word all this time ago. :heart:
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Just came by for a reread.

Lovely!

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Thank you for re-reading! You make my day. :heart:
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And another reread.

Francis, this is just wondeful. This is truly fabulous! You have taken another road with that last scene of Sonata and given us a wonderfully satisfying, equally plausible resolution.

Thank you!

(no promise that this is my last time reading this gem)

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Ooh, I'm so glad you popped this one back up, Jenna. I love it. Better than the end of Sonata, in some ways. It works so well--it's honest and it fits their characters. And it ties up that horrible loose end that was left hanging at the end of Moonlight. Dean Foster was a huge problem that was never addressed... and you fixed it with this story. Thank you, francis! :rose:

p.s. I miss Desdemona. :sigh:
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Oh jen, you make my week! Thank you so much!

alle, I miss Desdemona too. She got me into writing better. My stories would be crap without her advice.
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Your stories???

Doubt it.

This is just fabulous, Francis.

I have wondered if there was any association between Dean Foster of Click and Kelly Foster of NSTAV. Read a fic by somebody--can't remember who-- about this proving that I was not the only one wondering about the association.

Dean Foster was a huge loose end left hanging after Sonata.

Delicious twist on the end of Sonata!

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Oh thank you, jen! You read it again! :heart:
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Oh, francis!! :clapping: :clapping: Oh, that was absolutely amazingly perfectly...twisted!! I forgot to breath the whole time!! :clapping: :clapping:
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:hearts: Thank you, maggatha! :heart:
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Back to reread this story. I swear, it's a perfect Mick-Beth conversation. Beth has fire and determination, Mick sees all the worst parts of it, and they have to struggle to bridge a difficult gap... but their love for each other overcomes their stubbornness and all of the problems driving them apart.

I would love to see a continuation of this story, where Mick confronts Josef... :chin:
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Another interesting story with a twist .....
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