Letting Me Love You (In Between 5 and 6, PG13)

[Marigold]

This chapter was absolutely fantastic, Shadow!

Beth kissed me!

She kissed me.

She kissed me!

Beth kissed me.

I love how you repeated this line. It really illustrates just how excited Mick was to have been kissed by Beth.

Logan's vampspam was such a creative idea!

I love how you brought Lilah into this chapter. Mick obviously still mourns the life that he could have had. Little things in his vampire life can easily trigger these thoughts.

The dream sequence was wonderful! I wish it hadn't been interrupted by Josef!

Thank you! You tied these two chapters together remarkably well. See you tomorrow!

[Shadow]

At one point I had actually thought of making this chapter only three words long . . . Beth kissed me . . . .
(After that smile at the end of AD, it seemed like that would be all that would be going through Mick's mind for a while!)
But then it might not have fit quite so well with the next chapter.
Thanks so much, Marigold!

[maggatha3]

At one point I had actually thought of making this chapter only three words long . . . Beth kissed me . . . .
(After that smile at the end of AD, it seemed like that would be all that would be going through Mick's mind for a while!)
But then it might not have fit quite so well with the next chapter.

Sorry, I am so sorry!! I just had to at that!!

[Shadow]

oooops . . . I think I meant episode . . . .

[maggatha3]

LOL, I never notice the difference between your Chapters and the Episodes.

[Shadow]

LOL, I never notice the difference between your Chapters and the Episodes.