Enemies, chapter 7. G-PG13
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Enemies, chapter 7. G-PG13
And this is the chapter where I introduce my new beta, Nutmegger911. She is absolutely amazing! I don't know what I'd do without her. After you've read this, go check out her stories http://moonlightaholics.com/viewforum.php?f=269
Chapter 7
Josef shot Beth a worried glance and walked towards the other men.
“Ok. What have you got for me?” Josef’s men started feeling nervous, he could smell it.
“We were searching Ryder. Like you asked, and we found a couple of things.”
“What things?” One of Josef’s men handed him a note, his hand shaking all the while.
Josef opened it, and his eyes grew slightly larger with reading it.
Sarah still a sleeping beauty?
What the…? Josef thought. How the hell do they know about Sarah?
Various emotions passed through Josef’s face, Beth catching every single one. Shock, anger, puzzlement and......fear?
This must be bad. Beth thought, If the great Josef Kostan’s afraid, what hope do the rest of us have?
“You said there was more?” Josef asked stuffing the note in his pocket of his $50,000 Kiton suit.
“Yes sir. Follow me.”
They were all stood around Ryder Beth trying to see over Josef’s shoulder.
Tony cautiously lifted up Ryder’s shirt until you could see all of his chest. Beth pushed her way through so she could see Ryder and gasped at what she saw. He had slashes across his chest, blood was smeared everywhere and the worst part was it was used to write something…a message? No. A signature.
W.T.D
“What…who….what is that?” Beth stuttered looking up at Josef.
“I don’t know. But they’ve just made a huge mistake.” Josef bowed his head slightly in respect for Ryder then left the room, leaving a puzzled Beth and five men cowering with fear over the stench of anger and doubt left in the room.
A/N: Let me know your all still reading and what do you guys think....Review please.
Chapter 7
Josef shot Beth a worried glance and walked towards the other men.
“Ok. What have you got for me?” Josef’s men started feeling nervous, he could smell it.
“We were searching Ryder. Like you asked, and we found a couple of things.”
“What things?” One of Josef’s men handed him a note, his hand shaking all the while.
Josef opened it, and his eyes grew slightly larger with reading it.
Sarah still a sleeping beauty?
What the…? Josef thought. How the hell do they know about Sarah?
Various emotions passed through Josef’s face, Beth catching every single one. Shock, anger, puzzlement and......fear?
This must be bad. Beth thought, If the great Josef Kostan’s afraid, what hope do the rest of us have?
“You said there was more?” Josef asked stuffing the note in his pocket of his $50,000 Kiton suit.
“Yes sir. Follow me.”
They were all stood around Ryder Beth trying to see over Josef’s shoulder.
Tony cautiously lifted up Ryder’s shirt until you could see all of his chest. Beth pushed her way through so she could see Ryder and gasped at what she saw. He had slashes across his chest, blood was smeared everywhere and the worst part was it was used to write something…a message? No. A signature.
W.T.D
“What…who….what is that?” Beth stuttered looking up at Josef.
“I don’t know. But they’ve just made a huge mistake.” Josef bowed his head slightly in respect for Ryder then left the room, leaving a puzzled Beth and five men cowering with fear over the stench of anger and doubt left in the room.
A/N: Let me know your all still reading and what do you guys think....Review please.
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Re: Enemies, chapter 7. G-PG13
Come on this just got very thrilling - are you going to continue this story? *PLEEAAASE*???
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Oh what happening? I just found this story and have read the whole thing up to now.
I love it and can't wait for the next chapter.
I love it and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Just stumbled across this story and am hoping you plan to update it. I'm liking it.
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Ok just read 7 and want more,more please.very good story
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am really enjoying the short bites and the mystery.
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Uh-oh. Someone knows about Sarah. Mick needs to get back pronto.
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I just found this story because others recently posted about it. Hope you post more - it's just getting interesting.
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Is there a particular reason you haven't finished the story?
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I love a good mystery! Can't wait for more!!
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of couse we're still reading ,we all love a good mystery,on tothe next chapter
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Hey! Where's the rest of the story??! I could really use a good story right about now.
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Great mystery! And Mick hasn't returned yet? what did the initials mean and who is behind all that?
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