I really like how you addressed the fact that turnings are different depending on the circumstances. We saw the difference between when Coraline turned Mick, and when Josef re-turned him. When Mick was re-turned, he trusted Josef with his life, and indirectly, with Beth's. The result: a very intimate experience. I'm so glad that Beth has chosen this path, and I hope that it all goes well for her!
The concept of "Vampire Terms" makes a lot of sense to me, as well. Our human languages are just that - human. Vampires have different experiences and thus need additional words, such as "freshie," "Cleaner," "passing the event horizon," etc.
Thank you!




