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Re: The Long Journey Home (PG) Chap 3- Challenge 140
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:42 am
by Claudia
More and more interesting as the story develops, DSR. I'm not surprised. I've read your fic...
Re: The Long Journey Home (PG) Chap 3- Challenge 140
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 9:35 pm
by darkstarrising
Claudia wrote:More and more interesting as the story develops, DSR. I'm not surprised. I've read your fic...
Thanks, Claudia
Appreciate your kind words
Re: The Long Journey Home (PG) Chap 3- Challenge 140
Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:03 pm
by francis
I love Josef's snark about Danny's hair.
Re: The Long Journey Home (PG) Chap 3- Challenge 140
Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 1:18 am
by darkstarrising
francis wrote:I love Josef's snark about Danny's hair.
Thanks, francis
Danny gets picked on a lot in this story, and the hairspray comment was just begging to be made.
Re: The Long Journey Home (PG) Chap 3- Challenge 140
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:24 pm
by Kara
Kostan looked amused, St. John, not so much. Beth smiled as she answered, “No, it’s the ventilation system. This building is old and sometimes, old things make strange and unnecessary noises.”
Her reply only made Kostan chuckle, but St. John seemed to relax a bit.
Lol. Funny.
Oh no. Dano noticed Mick's lack of pulse.
Great chapter. Thanks.
Re: The Long Journey Home (PG) Chap 3- Challenge 140
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:49 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Very intriguing and at the same time, several lines just had be grinning and LOL! Loving this story!
