Loose Ends (PG) Challenge 149 6/18/13
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Re: Loose Ends (PG) Challenge 149 6/18/13
This really is one of my favorites. It plays like a missing scene
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Re: Loose Ends (PG) Challenge 149 6/18/13
Thanks, Carol
The end of OOTP just left so many unanswered questions. This story is just one version of what might have happened.

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Re: Loose Ends (PG) Challenge 149 6/18/13
Exquisite
Many, many times Moonlight seemed to cut off leaving us wanting more but leaving it to our imaginations to fill in--furled a lot of great fan fiction and also sums up a true gem of a show gone too soon.
This was wonderful. You dialogue is pitch perfect and you capture both Mick's voiceovers and Josef's multilayered snark with equal style and flare. Beth is not physically present for this scene between Mick and Josef, but her presence fills that room and our minds as we remember that emotionally packed reveal.
Thank you!
Jenna

Many, many times Moonlight seemed to cut off leaving us wanting more but leaving it to our imaginations to fill in--furled a lot of great fan fiction and also sums up a true gem of a show gone too soon.
This was wonderful. You dialogue is pitch perfect and you capture both Mick's voiceovers and Josef's multilayered snark with equal style and flare. Beth is not physically present for this scene between Mick and Josef, but her presence fills that room and our minds as we remember that emotionally packed reveal.
Thank you!
Jenna




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