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Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Wed May 04, 2011 8:14 pm
by loveyoumick
Ooohhhh...jealous Mick....seeeeeeeeexy !!!!
Dear PNWgal, you're one of that writers able to make sensuality more exciting than sexuality itself !!! And I do find this gem sensual ! :snicker:
I totally adore the fact that Mick will never, never be able to resist or stay mad at Beth for long, they are so perfect together.
One little thing : how am I supposed to listen to " Home" again, and not melt in front of everybody thinking about Mick tearing clothes ? :thud: :snicker:
Wonderful tale, thank you. :twothumbs:
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Wed May 04, 2011 8:35 pm
by allegrita
How is it possible that I've never commented on this piece of perfection?! Wow. :melts: :melts: :melts:

This is molten hot, and dangerous, and sexy, and did I mention molten hot? You do sensuous reeeeeeeeeeeeeeally well, Pgal... and hey, did you ever write Beth's half of the experience? 'Cause... dang. :happysigh: :happysigh:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Wed May 04, 2011 9:41 pm
by PNWgal
Awwww...thanks, loveyoumick! :smooch: Mick is definitely sexy when he's jealous, and Beth knows just how to play him. :teeth:

I don't know how you missed it, Alle :hug: , but I'm glad you found it now. Thanks, babe!

And no...I never did finish Beth's POV...maybe I should go dig that up again. :chin:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Wed May 04, 2011 10:28 pm
by allegrita
Yep... you definitely should. :teeth:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 3:51 am
by MoonlitRose
:hot: :worship: PNW

I seem to have missed this gem somehow, as well. :thud: :twothumbs: :thud:

:thanks2:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 4:18 am
by MickLifeCrisis
I don't remember it either but dang am I glad to find it now! Awesome PNWgal! :thud: What was it Beth said about Mick's jealousy making her feel desirable?? You nailed it!

:thanks:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 5:23 am
by moonlightlover60
Oh you do jealous Mick reclaiming what is his so well. :thud: I wish I could have a dance end like that. Thanks PNWgal :thanks:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 4:01 pm
by Lucy
this is a "return to" piece.... :2eyes:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 6:07 pm
by maggatha3
Dark , jealous Mick, yet not all that scary....and Beth is so good in handling the vamp within him...they are so obviously in love... :melts:

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Sat May 07, 2011 11:39 pm
by jen
In this reread, my first thought was that Beth was playing with fire here. She is in control here and she knows it.
Mick is truly putty in her hands.

Did she know what she was doing to Mick when she danced with Ben Talbot?

Very, very sensual. And hot. Very hot.

Time to turn up the AC...

Jenna

Re: Dance in the Darkness - PG-13

Posted: Sun May 08, 2011 7:38 am
by maggatha3
omg, PNWgal, I just noticed while reading again...''cool death pressed against the warm hope of life and love''. Mick will never get over himself, will he?Not even after being offered so much love and passion by Beth...