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Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 9:44 pm
by Albra
Beautiful, touching ...
In spite of everything she is happy woman.
She did it ... She stoped (or better - moved back) time ...
Thank you

Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 1:36 pm
by nutmegger911
This is absolutely beautiful! Everyone is so real. The conversations... Your dialogue hits the perfect note. With simple statements and looks you convey so much. Thank you.
Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 2:08 pm
by Catmoon
Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:45 am
by starbucksjunkie
Back for another great read.
I love this. Truly.
Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 6:38 am
by tucutecats
read this before and will read it again. excellent story, I just loved it
Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 9:59 am
by Catmoon
That one of my stories has become somewhat of a classic, that people keep on re-reading... what a thrill!

Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 2:24 pm
by one.zebra
/wanders through.../...'What? Me rereading....never happens....'/snicker/
..'Yeah, not rereading any of your other stuff either....

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Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:59 pm
by Kara
Going thru old stories. This was beautiful. Sad but beautiful. It made me sadder however thinking that Beth will be turned looking older than Mick. I know I'm being vain but, I, for one will not want to look older than my hubs.
Thank you.
Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:16 pm
by jen
Wonderful!
Not, sobbing. Definitely leaking, but I can't afford to trash the makeup until I am done with work so I must leak carefully.
Bittersweet, in that I want an eternally young Beth Turner. Of course, it will bother her more than Mick, but that is how we women are.
Mick would follow her to D.C., it is totally his style.
Thanks, Catmoon!
And you have your very own smilie

Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:17 am
by MickLifeCrisis
I did get teary-eyed reading this, but it was beautiful. Beth gained wisdom over the years, and apparently Mick gained some as well. He didn't hesitate a second when she said she was ready.
When she was talking to Josef, I wondered why Josef said Mick was waiting to see her, how Mick would know she'd returned. Never occurred to me that he had followed her to DC and back again, but of course it makes perfect sense that he did.
Even though this is a bit sad and Beth had many regrets, it is still a very romantic story!

Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 9:09 am
by maggatha3
Re: Twenty-two Years. PG13
Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:37 am
by Catmoon
Thats for the comments! Glad you enjoyed.