Afterglow, part nine (PG-13) - TEASER

[wpgrace]

GA, I promise that you will find out one way or the other in chapter 9 (about Pete). See? Not really that much of a tease....

Grace, um, same goes, k?

Red

Ok... cool... Now what about the Alle v. Beth square off?????

[francis]

That's what I think about your little stunt with the cliffhanger.

That's what I think about you and the story in itself.
So, get it on! I can't wait.

[redwinter101]

Message received and understood, francis.

[coco]

What's happened to Beth ?
You are indeed a tease Red

[bank1115]

Too bad Beth's not a vamp so she could be staked! I'm so darn mad at her part of me thinks she got what she deserved but oh the consequences! Will she never learn? And I agree I'm not trusting Pete either. Just how did Carlyle learn so much as to change his security? Red I didn't realize you had such a mean streak. hmm, good to know. kays

[darkstarrising]

I don't know that I can take anymore....first the Alex news, then you post a teaser!!!!

I've followed this story from one board to another, whither thou goest.....I'll be right behind!

I'm going to hold you to having Chapter 9 up when the board comes back next week...otherwise , I'll be

[MickLifeCrisis]

But, but, but Beth PROMISED !! She promised Josef she would back off! I even went back to Chapter 8 to check. She said, "I promise." Now she's gone and got herself caught, and Pete, too, and no Mick or Josef around to rescue her... Red, WHAT a place to leave us while the board is down!

[starbucksjunkie]

Beth. Beth. Beth. You never learn. Nobody immortal is watching your back this time, girlfriend.

And you, red. You are mean.

But thank you anyway.

[mitzie]

OMG--how did I miss this part??!! Oh yes, this is quite the evil cliffie!!!! Shame on you, Red!!!! Now look what Beth has gone and done after she promised Josef to back off!!!! I don't know if I really trust this Pete guy!! Don't back off of your promise now, Red. I expect to see Chapter 9 up here after the transition!!!!

I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter...

mitzie

[Liana]

The girl has a death wish?! What the hell is wrong with her?!
No matter how careful she is, she's no match against a syndicate!!
Stupid girl!! Didn't she understand how her actions almost killed Mick?!
I want to smack her badly right now!!
If they don't kill her on the spot, they'll hold her hostage, then they definitely won't be together...
Damn it!!!
At least, I hope they'll leave Pete alive.
I'm not sure he's a good guy yet, but he could tell the world what happened, maybe find Josef?!

[redwinter101]

coco, kays, yes I am a big meanie

dsr, my promises (unlike a certain character's) are something you can count on...

MLC, she did indeed. A promise obviously isn't what it used to be. Oh the consequences..

sbj, she never does. Maybe this time she will??

mitzie, liana, yep, she's really gone and done it this time. Big time.

Red

[redwinter101]

Last chance before the board goes down tomorrow......

[dreamcatcher]

Oh, what a massive tease! This has made the waiting so much worse!!!

And now everyone is giving Beth grief! Some even want to slap her! (Ouch!) But I’m giving her the benefit of the doubt here as I think it would too much (even for Beth) if she went ahead with her investigation knowing what the consequences might be UNLESS she or Pete had uncovered a hugely significant piece of info! She’s was so upset over what happened to Mick last time so it just wouldn’t ring true for her to go ahead with this otherwise!

Loved this teaser: Can’t wait to get the full chapter!

[Trixie]

Oh man....a real nail-biter!

[redwinter101]

dreamcatcher, Trixie, thanks for reading. As for how Beth and Pete ended up in that alley, you'll just have to wait a few days and all will become clear.

Red