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Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 11:32 pm
by redwinter101
Thanks,
pinkiepie (for the comment and for inspiring coco's lovely vid).
Red
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:26 am
by Penina Spinka
That was beautiful. I wondered when he died for her, but he did, when he gave up being human to save her. I don't have that gift to put so much into so few words, but you do. Thanks.
Penina
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:58 am
by starbucksjunkie
Thank you for this, red.
His limbs curled around me, a silver stare; possession, passion, desire flowing between us. My love, my everything, my reason.
This is my favorite line--the opening. Desire flowing between us. Beautiful.
And now I'm off to see the vid.
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:20 am
by janicevictoria
Red, Another jaw droppingly brilliant fic. I loved the fact that it was Beth who was stating that Mick was "mine"; it's usually Mick that uses that term for her, so it was great to see she feels just as possessive of
him.
Our future. I don't know what that means any more. I don't care. It will be. We will be.
Loved this line, it shows that Beth realizes that she will do whatever it takes to be with Mick through eternity.....sighs to self.....just blissful, Red!

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:22 am
by GuardianAngel
Brave, bright, beautiful, always a little sad, even in joy.
How perfectly Mick.
Mine. The word never made me shiver quite like it does now.
Couldn't help it, at the end I wanted to negate her. Just like a two year old I wanted to yell "No! Mine!" Yeah *snicker* Dont' I wish.
Absolutely beautific, Red. Absolutely.
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 5:45 pm
by redwinter101
Penina - thank you. Yes that was precisely what I meant about Mick dying for her. I'm delighted you enjoyed this.
sbj, thank you and I hope you enjoyed the lovely vid.
jv, sometimes, just sometimes, I manage something that won't break your heart. Thank you, as always, for stopping by to read and comment.
GA, GuardianAngel wrote:How perfectly Mick.
The most perfect compliment. Thank you, sweetie.
Red
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 7:50 pm
by Albra
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:30 pm
by redwinter101
That's just lovely,
Albra. The words and the smileys.
Red
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 12:40 am
by one.zebra
We ARE Beth....
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:15 am
by redwinter101
one.zebra wrote:We ARE Beth....
Does that mean I have to share?
Red
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 7:12 am
by janicevictoria
jv, sometimes, just sometimes, I manage something that won't break your heart. Thank you, as always, for stopping by to read and comment.

But sometimes that's a good thing, you know, like the way watching 'Wuthering Heights' makes you feel...sad but good

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 9:01 am
by redwinter101
And another

for
jv.
Red

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:21 am
by jen
Lovely, just lovely.
My MickBeth heart is happy.
Thank you, Red!
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:57 am
by tucutecats
Oh how i wish I had a vampire of my very own. Red you are without a doubt one of the finest writers we have, the moment I see you name I'm on it. Thank you,thankyou.
Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 10:21 am
by redwinter101
jen, tucutecats, thank you both so much. I wish for a vampire all my own too.
Red