Moonlightaholics

Pgal! Wonderful!!
Red beat me to it, that last line WAS a kiiler!
Evocative, loving, comfortable and erotic all at the same time!
The whole thing a very succinct summary of their interesting relationship.

Who needs a lot of words when it all comes together like this! I loved the light heartedness of this for Both of them, but still so much said! Thank You!!

Kelly

Wow. Just lovely.

And that's the best last line you've ever written. Period.

Another gem, PNWgal...Loved it

Awee, so sweet. And terrific last line!

Me too! ... loved your closing line! Very fitting, and oh, soooooo true!

So glad I didn't read this before I posted mine...

Jeeze, you are an AWESOME writer...this is perfect. I adore it.

I especially loved this line:

"Hrmph." Mick was only slightly mollified.

The 'hrmph' just cracks me up.

Oh I just loved that PNW.

Quite the year for this pair.

Aaaawwwwww..... that was sooooo nice, full of love and just.... perfect!

sigh.... just lovely. And yep, the fic got us right on the last line. Clever. A well crafted piece P-gal.

Thanks, jen, Jo, kyple!

SBJ, eris, MoonlitRose, Luxe....a word about that last line. I've read (and quite possibly written) fic where Mick is so pathetically grateful for any scrap of affection from Beth that he's like a whupped hound. I'd like to think that Beth is just as grateful that Mick loves her. And...thank you, all of you. Last lines are the worst for me, so I'm glad I got this one right.

And - SBJ - guess I'm finally learned that 'less is more', yes?

fairytoes, coco, janice...thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

LOL, gl...I figured Mick would get his feathers ruffled a bit at Beth's comment. Thanks for reading, sweetheart.

Yep--Read it again, just to make sure it was as brilliant as I thought it was the first time, ok, the first 2 times, but who's counting? My only complaint? Wish it had been a 4 hour challenge, because then there would have been more of this.

That last line is amazing. No doubt that you are a phenomenal writer. NO DOUBT AT ALL.

Ahem. Sorry, sometimes I get a bit carried away.

You're too good to me, sweetcheeks.

The last line was perfection...

My bad! I thought I had posted a reply!! This was very beautiful and sexy!! I too loved that last line tremendously!!!! So well-done!!!!

mitzie