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Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:07 pm
by coco
Loved it Josef's Rose. :thumbs:

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:10 pm
by MSJ_sunglasses
Very appropriate gift and a surprise ending - loved it! :clapping:

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 7:19 pm
by JosefsRose
MSJ_sunglasses wrote:Very appropriate gift and a surprise ending - loved it! :clapping:
Thank you. What do you give a vamp that has everything.
coco wrote:Loved it Josef's Rose. :thumbs:
I'm glad hun.
MoonlitRose wrote:Now that was a gift that only Beth could give! I was so expecting it to be Mick! Great surprize! :thumbs: :curtesy: :hug:
That was the general idea.
eris wrote:Why do I get the feeling Josef would consider that a down-payment more than a gift? :whistle: Nice one :thumbs:
I think you could be right. He might think it a gift, as she did the vamp nation a favour.
MickLifeCrisis wrote:I wasn't expecting that ending at all! This was great!
I like to surprize people. Job done!!
jenstc2003 wrote:This is SOOO like Beth! I love it!
I think I channeled her for this one. She comes now and then.
PNWgal wrote:I LIKED this. Beth dropping off a little thank-you for Josef after helping her "deal" with that slimy Foster.

Good job!
Beth, felt responsible, and Josef helped her.
allegrita wrote:This is wonderful--a very appropriate gift for Beth to give to Josef, but one he wouldn't have expected. I like this, JosefsRose!
Praise indeed from one such as yourself.
RangerCM wrote:How original! Very nice surprise. Had me the whole way through. I'm just loving this challenge, today!
I haven't done alot of challenges, but this one caught my attention.
Fleur de Lisa wrote:You got me!!
Love our feisty, brave Beth.
Yes she is. Thanks.
redwinter101 wrote:I agree with Lucky - this is SO Beth...

And I'm sure Josef appreciated it. :snicker:

Red
librarian_7 wrote:I like this. And it's very much something Beth would think to do.

Lucky
Josef is a connoisseur of fine thing. Beth is well aware of the fact. She is very savvy.
francis wrote:That was unexpected. That it was Josef, I mean. But it makes sense. She wouldn't let him drink directly from her, but giving him her precious blood would actually be one thing that he can't buy himself. And she has a big thankyou to make for the Foster case.
Well done!
I am humbled. Thank you. No Josef would never feed directly from her, so her gift was all the more poignant.
wollstonecraft61 wrote:Wow, I wasn't expecting that ending! I was picturing Mick, but I should have been clued when he seemed nonchalant about it initially. Great work!!!!!! :hearts:
That was the general idea, most readers would assume Mick as he is reluctant to feed fresh. Thanks.
wpgrace wrote:Josef scores again! :evillaugh: Lovely Sweetie!
Yep, he had to get in on the action.

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 7:21 pm
by JosefsRose
cassysj wrote:Well she did owe Josef a gift for taking care of business. I really liked it! It was a surprise.
OOps nearly missed you. Thank you Cassy.

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:16 pm
by Luxe de Luxe
wow... love the premise.

your writing really flows JR... honestly, this two hour thing is really bringing out the best in people.

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 1:49 am
by Lucy
certainly more savory than a pound of flesh.....

Nice twist!

Lucy

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 2:12 am
by Catmoon
Ah, surprise ending. I like it! It is indeed the perfect gift for a vampire.

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 6:31 am
by mitzie
Beautifully done, a true surprise and a truly Beth gift!! I loved it!!!! :rose: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :gasp: :yahoo: :hyper: :hyper: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :cloud9: :clapping: :clapping: :thud: :thud: :heart:

mitzie

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 3:08 pm
by Phoenix
Great ending. :thumbs:

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:44 pm
by jmc
What do you give someone who has everything?

And I think spunky Beth would want to feel sort of 'even' and not too beholden to Josef.

:reading: Thank you.

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:38 pm
by Moonlighter
What?! LOL! You got me on this one, JR! But that is so like Beth. Good on her! And it certainly is a rare gift that says thank you for "sorting out that problem." Nice job!

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:50 pm
by allegrita
Back for a reread...and I can't help thinking, wow--two bags! Beth really gets the value of what Josef did for her... but I wonder if Josef will consider that to be enough...? And still, I bet the day will come when Mick finds out, and I'm not sure how he's gonna feel when he discovers that his best girl and his best friend have been conspiring to murder his enemies BEHIND HIS BACK....

Dun-dun-dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:59 am
by JosefsRose
Wow I was surprised to find this back up on the new posts list. :gasp:

Thank you to those who commented in the past and I didn't reply to, and a big thank you to those who have recently commented. :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:

Jenny :rose:

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 7:41 pm
by jen
Wonderful!

That phrase regarding the insight he got from the blood has got me thinking, though. Now what does that mean?

I was thinking, she should have cleared something like this with Mick first, just in case she is breaking some form of protocol, but if this is for taking care of Dean Foster, any discussion with Mick would be inadvisable.

Nice answer to the challenge.

Jenna

Re: An Unexpected Gift- G

Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 9:38 pm
by tucutecats
So Joseph/ A great thank you gift.one he would surely appreatiate