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Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:08 am
by Emma-lee
So sweet and innocent. I loved this.
Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:23 am
by wpgrace
Well damn,
Red!
I've been so excited about and for Alex all day... and now you've done and gone made me yearn for Mick again! And you KNOW I love the backstory pieces... Oh

! And

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:47 am
by janicevictoria
Red, Gorgeously written as usual and I loved the peek into Mick's pre-vampire life. Sweet and poignant

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:50 am
by starbucksjunkie
Did you write this in two hours?
Unbelievable.
So rich in detail, wistful, beautiful.
I love you, red.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 3:03 am
by wollstonecraft61
Oh, Red, there you go again with that gift of language you have! I love that this gift predated Mick's vamp days. What with the fascination with the vampire, we don't dwell enough on the man! This piece was piercing, but in a pleasurable way!!!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 3:29 am
by MSJ_sunglasses
Red, your first three sentences had me thinking it was a Mick becoming human again story, but then it changed into a beautiful, very poignant war time piece. I'm sure that many unexpected gifts just like the little girl's were handed over during that era.
Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:23 am
by eris
Wow... just wow... There are real stories like this, simple kindness and humanity in the midst of war, and this captures the essence of them beautifully.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:59 am
by MoonlitRose
Red,
What a beautiful glimpse of the other side of war. Those little acts of kindness that were so precious to the giver and the recipient.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:08 am
by francis
Wonderful, redwinter. I like the contrast of the frozen soldier thawing to life by warmth, memories, and then the kindness of a little girl providing food. The short panic where they acted as soldiers again just shows how different a soldier is from another human being, in survival mode they run on instinct. I love young Mick stories of before he was a vampire. Maybe being a vampire wasn't so foreign to him, he has been a soldier, and it has certain similarities.
That you wrote this in such a short time is another thing to marvel. Well done!
Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 11:59 am
by redwinter101
MLC, you should know by now to have the tissues handy.
Emma-lee, thanks! Delighted you enjoyed it.
Grace, ah, honey, you know me. I'm
all about Mick.
jv, 
thank you.
sbj, yep, two hours. Now I wonder why it takes me weeks with other stuff

. But I do enjoy writing to a prompt. Love you, too

.
Woll, thank you, as always, my friend.
MSJ_s, I'm sure you're right. Innocence and kindness in the midst of brutality - a recurring theme for Mick, I think.
eris, 
thank you (and I'm sorry, again).
MoonlitRose, oh yes - so precious. A little touch of humanity to keep out the cold.
francis, you may well be right. Mick has always known how to survive, whatever the nature of the war.
Red
Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:51 pm
by greenleaf9
Beautiful
red
No one died, and no heartbreak, but my eyes welled with tears just the same.
This is so heartwarming.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:07 pm
by mitzie
Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:14 pm
by fairytoes
What a perfect Story! I really enjoyed reading it, and yes, I had tears in my eyes as well!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:08 pm
by coco
Wonderful setting
Red. Loved it.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 7:03 pm
by redwinter101
greenleaf9, mitzie, fairytoes, coco, thank you all so much.
Red