An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13

[librarian_7]

Nice twist, MLC. You had me going for a second there!

Lucky

[francis]

Aww, MLC, that's truly romantic. Mick has a knack for doing the proposal thing, maybe because it's not his first. Hehe.
Very romantic, and the line about the name being the one thing he can give her, that's so sweet.
Thank you!

[greenleaf9]

Awww, Mick and Beth are so perfect together in this.

This is just beautiful....so romantic. Mick's definitely a keeper. The long paragraph describing their evening, oh boy, I could just picture it...well done!

YAY MLC has her own office! You better believe I'll be dropping by reguarlary to say hello. *gl9 offers MLC a potted plant as an officewarming gift.*

Loved this story! *applauds*

[MickLifeCrisis]

Thanks everyone, for reading and commenting!

Mitzie, Allegrita and Lucky, *heehee* I had you going there for a minute, didn't I? Not to worry, I don't think my Mick would ever turn Beth without discussing it to death, first. (Pun intended! )

Francis, sweet and romantic - that's my Mick!

Greenleaf, that my words could make you "just picture it" is a tremendous compliment and I thank you. I'm so glad you liked the story. Thanks also for the potted plant. The shelves are kind of empty right now, so that will certainly help!

[wpgrace]

Nicely played, MLC! I think you got us all! And delivered a lovely piece in the bargain.

I am so pleased to see a new fic from you!!!!!

[coco]

Oh MLC I'm so happy I found this.

This was just so very beautiful. I loved every word of it.

[Phoenix]

Sweet, MLC.

[MickLifeCrisis]

Grace, Coco and Phoenix, thank you so much for your lovely comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Moonlighter]

“I want you by my side, always. I want us to be together.” He nuzzled her neck. “I want to give you a gift. The greatest gift I can give you.”

Beth’s eyes popped open, and her heart began to race. “Mick… what…?” He shushed her with a finger to her lips, as he reached under the pillow with his other hand.

“Beth,” his voice cracked as he opened the small box. “My name is the one thing truly my own. I want to give it to you. Will you be Mrs. St. John?”

Well holy crap, MLC!! First of all, I'm so glad I found this little gem, but then you go and scare me to death with the Coraline-speak, then you make me tear up with that sweet, sweet Has-Mick's-name-written-all-over-it proposal!!!! I LOVED it! Please write more, 'k? Thanks!

[Kara]

My answer is a resounding YES. I wish, lol. Thank you.

[MickLifeCrisis]

Wow, Moonlighter! I'm so glad you found this and enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting. You know I love the "gotcha" moments.

Kara, I think Beth answered with a resounding "yes" too! Thank you for commenting!

[helloeeze]

Ahhh!!! Loved this, the sentimental gurl I am! I liked this better than a turning.

[jen]

Awwwww.

Lovely!

[MickLifeCrisis]

Thank you helloeeze and jen! I'm happy you enjoyed my little bit of MickBeth!

[Moonlighter]

Zipping back through to revisit, MLC. Classic romantic Mick. Love him, the sentimental lug!