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Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 7:04 am
by librarian_7
Nice twist, MLC. You had me going for a second there!
Lucky
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 7:56 am
by francis
Aww, MLC, that's truly romantic. Mick has a knack for doing the proposal thing, maybe because it's not his first. Hehe.
Very romantic, and the line about the name being the one thing he can give her, that's so sweet.
Thank you!
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 4:23 pm
by greenleaf9
Awww, Mick and Beth are so perfect together in this.
This is just beautiful....so romantic. Mick's definitely a keeper.

The long paragraph describing their evening, oh boy, I could just picture it...well done!
YAY MLC has her own office!

You better believe I'll be dropping by reguarlary to say hello.

*gl9 offers MLC a potted plant as an officewarming gift.*
Loved this story! *applauds*

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 2:00 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Thanks everyone, for reading and commenting!
Mitzie,
Allegrita and
Lucky, *heehee* I had you going there for a minute, didn't I?

Not to worry, I don't think my Mick would ever turn Beth without discussing it to death, first. (Pun intended!

)
Francis, sweet and romantic - that's my Mick!
Greenleaf, that my words could make you "just picture it" is a tremendous compliment and I thank you. I'm so glad you liked the story. Thanks also for the potted plant.

The shelves are kind of empty right now, so that will certainly help!
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 2:10 am
by wpgrace
Nicely played,
MLC! I think you got us all! And delivered a lovely piece in the bargain.
I am so pleased to see a new fic from you!!!!!

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 5:37 pm
by coco
Oh
MLC I'm so happy I found this.
This was just so very beautiful. I loved every word of it.

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 3:01 pm
by Phoenix
Sweet, MLC.

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 12:34 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Grace,
Coco and
Phoenix, thank you so much for your lovely comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:06 pm
by Moonlighter
MickLifeCrisis wrote:“I want you by my side, always. I want us to be together.” He nuzzled her neck. “I want to give you a gift. The greatest gift I can give you.”
Beth’s eyes popped open, and her heart began to race. “Mick… what…?” He shushed her with a finger to her lips, as he reached under the pillow with his other hand.
“Beth,” his voice cracked as he opened the small box. “My name is the one thing truly my own. I want to give it to you. Will you be Mrs. St. John?”
Well holy crap, MLC!! First of all, I'm so glad I found this little gem, but then you go and scare me to death with the Coraline-speak, then you make me tear up with that sweet, sweet Has-Mick's-name-written-all-over-it proposal!!!! I LOVED it! Please write more, 'k? Thanks!
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 10:47 pm
by Kara
My answer is a resounding YES.

I wish, lol. Thank you.
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:53 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Wow,
Moonlighter! I'm so glad you found this and enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting.

You know I love the "gotcha" moments.
Kara, I think Beth answered with a resounding "yes" too! Thank you for commenting!

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:25 am
by helloeeze
Ahhh!!!

Loved this, the sentimental gurl I am! I liked this better than a turning.

Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:05 am
by jen
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:18 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Thank you
helloeeze and
jen!

I'm happy you enjoyed my little bit of MickBeth!
Re: An Unexpected Gift - MickBeth - PG13
Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:32 pm
by Moonlighter
Zipping back through to revisit, MLC. Classic romantic Mick. Love him, the sentimental lug! 