Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:33 am
WOW! Thank you, Red! I'm touched...and it's beautiful. 
My pleasure - and thanks for your note.allegrita wrote:WOW! Thank you, Red! I'm touched...and it's beautiful.
Red
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Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:33 pm
Red
Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:14 pm
Pure poetry. So in character, and absolutely beautiful.
Thank you!.
Thank you!.
Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:59 pm
Thanks, jen. 
Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 8:10 pm
Gah! This was gorgeous. As a sucker for any MickBeth fic, this ranks right up there among stories/drabbles that just describe their relationship down to the bare bones of it.
Ri -- your comment was as evocative as the drabble itself.rijane wrote:I love the metaphor here - the idea that Mick has been holding his breath for 20 years resonates with me - everything about that metaphor works - the pressure, the relief, the release. I love that hard.
Another of my favourites is the "strange landscape of my past" line, that paints such a perfect picture of Mick that was before - I see him standing stark against a twisted background and moving toward Beth and her coming to meet him there (I see the hope as her light on the darkened plains).
You're so right -- it's a quick squeeze to my heart. Well said and I second the compliment to Red!rijane wrote:A very great work here in such a small space.
Brava!
Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:24 pm
Thanks, Moonlighter - and ITA about Ri's comment.
Red
Red
Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:55 am
You write the most wonderful romantic drabbles.
Beautiful!
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Beautiful!
.Re: Pause (Mick, PG)
Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:07 pm
I am a hopeless romantic, jen.
Yeah, yeah, yeah - newsflash.
Red
Yeah, yeah, yeah - newsflash.
Red