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two little bites of goodness emma-lee. I particularly liked the second, conveying Coraline's sorrow.

darkstarrising wrote:Emma-Lee,

what a wonderful response to the challenge!! One man's joy at winning 100Gs countered by one woman's sorrow at losing something more precious than money.

Beautifully done!

Thank you very much darkstar. I am glad you enjoyed them.

allegrita wrote:I like them both individually, Emma-lee, but as a pair they are wonderful because of the contrast between them. Beautifully done!

Thanks Alle. I was hoping the contrast would not be too much.

Luxe de Luxe wrote:two little bites of goodness emma-lee. I particularly liked the second, conveying Coraline's sorrow.

Thank you Luxe. Cora was my favorite one as well....but then i am biased I think Cora was my favorite character on ML. Shhhh don't tell Josef...LOL.

These are nice. I like the contrast in mood.

nutmegger911 wrote:These are nice. I like the contrast in mood.

Thank you nutmegger911. I am glad you liked it.

Wow... Em!

Two incredibly different tones... both utterly marvelous!

I enjoyed these clever drabbles.

wpgrace wrote:Wow... Em!

Two incredibly different tones... both utterly marvelous!

Thanks wpgrace!

Catmoon wrote: I enjoyed these clever drabbles.

Thank you Catmoon, I am glad you enjoyed them!

I love both of them!! The contrast between the two is wonderful!! I like the Cora one the best. Great job!!!!


mitzie

mitzie wrote:I love both of them!! The contrast between the two is wonderful!! I like the Cora one the best. Great job!!!!


mitzie

Thanks Mitzie. *takes a bow* I am glad you enjoyed them.

Moonlighter wrote:Nice! The poker one was funny. Poor G -- walking right into the lion's den.

The second one...I'm no Coraline fan, so all I could think is "that's what you get" (oooh, harsh, isn't it?) but I am only thankful that she created our beautiful vampire Mick. Sorry, but that's all the sympathy I can muster!

Thanks for reading. I love writing Guillermo he is so fun. And Coraline either you hate her or love her..thanks for reading.

Just revisiting challenges. Poor Guillermo he will never get out of the rematch. Poor Coraline there are a lot of regrets for her.

cassysj wrote:Just revisiting challenges. Poor Guillermo he will never get out of the rematch. Poor Coraline there are a lot of regrets for her.

Thanks for coming by again. And Yes Cora does have A LOT of regrets and Guillermo is just fun to torment.

Emma Lee

These are both wonderful!!

Guillermo winning the poker game with Josef was a fluke and while Josef is certain to seek a rematch, not for the money but 'the principle of the thing' I hope he has a change of heart. A hundred thousand dollars is pocket change to Josef. It's probably a lot of money to Guillermo. I hope he has a change of heart but...I doubt it.

The second one is poignant, and shows a Coraline who is not as cold and remorseless as the one we tend to see by default. She recognizes that she made a terrible mistake with Mick. I really hope she manages to learn from it.

Thank you!

Jenna

jen wrote:Emma Lee

These are both wonderful!!

Guillermo winning the poker game with Josef was a fluke and while Josef is certain to seek a rematch, not for the money but 'the principle of the thing' I hope he has a change of heart. A hundred thousand dollars is pocket change to Josef. It's probably a lot of money to Guillermo. I hope he has a change of heart but...I doubt it.

The second one is poignant, and shows a Coraline who is not as cold and remorseless as the one we tend to see by default. She recognizes that she made a terrible mistake with Mick. I really hope she manages to learn from it.

Thank you!

Jenna

Thank you Jenna Yes I do hope Josef reconsiders but I suspect you are right and that he won't. And that is how I see Coraline as someone who loved Mick very much but went about it the wrong way.