Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 3] PG13

NocturneInCMoll · Post by **NocturneInCMoll** » Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:33 pm

Thanks, Draco! Glad you're enjoying. Mick's self-loathing is under control for the moment, we'll see what happens. As for Josh...well, we'll see about that, too.

Mick may not be his first problem...

coco · Post by **coco** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:24 pm

I'm so pleased to see an update to this one, Nocturne. I love this story.

Add my name to the chorus for those already loving the parallel conversations between Mick & Leni and Beth & Josh. I adore that this story is set in and around my favourite time for ML. You have captured Beth so perfectly.

Fabulous.

NocturneInCMoll · Post by **NocturneInCMoll** » Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:27 am

Thanks so much, Coc! Glad you like it.

Josef is threatening to derail those parallel conversations you all seem to like so much. He seems to want an entire chapter.

I'll have to see if there's anything I can do about that, because I like how the convos are working, too. Anyway, I'm pleased you think I've captured Beth; she's kinda tricky sometimes.

VampFan5 · Post by **VampFan5** » Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:45 am

Hey Julie,

Sorry I'm late to the party. I've worked 14 days straight with no break, yikes. Anyways, I love how understanding Josh is in this story compared to your other one where he meets an untimely end. The conversation between Leni and Mick was very cute with her reassuring him he's not a monster and even laying down to go to sleep so at ease with a hungry vampire around. I love it.

Julia

NocturneInCMoll · Post by **NocturneInCMoll** » Sat Nov 21, 2009 5:29 am

Hey, Julia--that's okay, at least you came to the party. I haven't had much time for reading lately either, and I'm wayyyy behind (I see you finished Sometime Past Midnight, and I still haven't read past Ch. 4 or 5, I think). Anyway, thanks--glad you're liking how I'm treating Josh in this story so far--I do promise he won't end up like the Josh in WAY,MSJ? So far he's more understanding, but does he understand? We'll see. Glad you're liking the Mick-Leni interaction as well. Poor Mick. Leni's all calm, and he's a nervous wreck.

P.S. I hope you get a break soon!

Shadow · Post by **Shadow** » Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:26 am

Oh good, you've continued with this story! (And a while ago - I see I haven't been keeping up very well....)

I love the interaction between Mick and Leni, and getting to know more about Leni - she's such a great character and you really bring her to life.
And I adore Josh's comment about what's happening to the Red Cross blood supply ...

Very nice!

NocturneInCMoll · Post by **NocturneInCMoll** » Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:51 pm

Thanks so much, Shadow! (Did you see Ch. 4 has been up for a bit now, too?

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I'm glad you're enjoying Leni. It's too bad we didn't get to see what happened to her on the show--or what she thought about all the weirdness about Mick...
And Josh is pleased that you find him amusing on his own merit...most people only laugh at his chicken line, and he didn't intend that one as a joke!

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Fever Redux (or, No-Star Cell Service) [ch. 3] PG13

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