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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 3:26 am
by Moonlighter
Luxe, this was wonderful. You have describe so well Mick's contemplation over these sleepless years that eventually brings him to recognize the humanity he so much desires. Very, very beautiful!
Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 3:43 am
by jen
Luxe
I wish it was possible to teach someone to write as you do. Weave the emotional content of that wonderful show so skillfully and give us glimpses of the mental journey Mick went through in the aftermath of his rescue of a four year old child and reclaimed his soul.
Delighted to see this pop back to the top of Active Topics. Saved the trouble of hunting it up.
I think I need to hang out in your office for a while...
Thank you!
Jenna
Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 9:45 pm
by Luxe de Luxe
thanks so much,
Moonlighter!
and
jen 
your comments are always such a pleasure.
Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127
Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:26 am
by cassysj
I just had to give this gem a bump. Beth cost Mick a lot of sleep over the years but it's all worth it to him
Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127
Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 6:28 am
by Marigold
Beautifully done, Luxe.
I really like how you included so many different Moonlight themes in this story (insomnia, love, humanity, pain, etc.).
The last line is perfect.
Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127
Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:03 am
by Catmoon
Wow. Amazing and powerful. Describes perfectly the complex bond Mick feels with Beth.