Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)
Thank you, nutmegger. I like Guillermo too.
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)
Very lovely backstory with so much potential for the future.
It is rare for a fic on a supporting character to have so many 'loose ends' that just cry out to be explored in other fics!!
This just cries out for further development!
Great job!!!

It is rare for a fic on a supporting character to have so many 'loose ends' that just cry out to be explored in other fics!!
This just cries out for further development!
Great job!!!













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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)
Found this treasure the first time in the library but found it again at Champaign Challenges and it is one of those stories that is even better the second time around.
You have created a wonderful ensemble of rich, detailed characters and I love your take on Josef here.
Great story!!!
Thank you!

You have created a wonderful ensemble of rich, detailed characters and I love your take on Josef here.
Great story!!!
Thank you!







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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)
This was a great detailed story of Guillermo's turning, and his meeting Josef and Mick for the first time. Well done, ladies! I love all your tie-ins -- the Terrence reference was especially unexpected -- and how Guillermo became the head vamp at the morgue after Dr. Griffith's relocation. And to end with the text message scene was genius!
Thanks for putting your creative minds together to come up with this fantastic answer to the Challenge!
Thanks for putting your creative minds together to come up with this fantastic answer to the Challenge!

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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kylara)
Thank you, Moonlighter!
Kylara came up with that great storyline, and I loved to plant clues and hints to the show. It was fun.
Kylara came up with that great storyline, and I loved to plant clues and hints to the show. It was fun.
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kyl
This is one of my favorites. I love the rich backstory for Guillermo It makes perfect sense why G called Josef because they go way back.
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Re: Night Turn (PG-13) - Guillermo story (by francis and Kyl
Such a great story! It reads so fresh after all this time. Well done francis and kylara. 
