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Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:09 pm
by redwinter101
PNWgal wrote:anything that makes me smile and sigh happily is a winner in my book.

That's so lovely, sweetie - thank you.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:18 pm
by lorig
This was just incredible. The signifigance of the following line struck my heart....
Until Beth. Lying here, together, safe, alone, the memories of their first meeting still clutched at him. There had been others, each rescue, each saved soul adding a tiny building block of self-respect, feeding his resolve to go on. But it was the trust of a child in him, only in him, always in him, that changed everything. His yearning for life was grounded in her. Without her he might have been content to continue hiding, keeping himself separate, finding pleasure where he could. But for her he rediscovered the battered remnants of humanity; for her he trapped himself between two worlds; for her he tried to be enough.
Beautiful Red..

Stop making me cry, it's ruining my make-up...

Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:26 pm
by redwinter101
Aw, thanks,
lorig. Have a hankie, sweetie.
Red

Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 11:27 pm
by jen
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:13 am
by redwinter101
Oh gush away, honey.
Seriously, thank you. I'm so pleased you liked this.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:32 pm
by fairytoes
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:44 pm
by coco
Yeah, I like this one.
I've always loved that image of Mick mapping Beth's body. *swoon*
She turned, a soft caress to his cheek, feeling his smile curve against her palm.
Still my favourite line.

Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:57 pm
by jenstc2003
This is gorgeous Red! I can't believe I hadn't read it before!
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:47 pm
by redwinter101
fairytoes, coco, jen, thank you all.
Red

Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 10:34 pm
by librarian_7
And yet another little masterpiece...I say "little" only in terms of number of words.
This is...an accomplishment.
Lucky
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:00 am
by redwinter101
:curtesy:
Thanks,
Lucky.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:33 am
by wpgrace
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:10 am
by jen
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:47 am
by redwinter101
Grace, having a Dr. Seuss moment?
jen, thank you.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:52 pm
by francis
I still love this with all my heart. I only didn't choose anything by red because I could never restrict myself to just one.
It's electrical, and it makes me cry.
