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Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:48 pm
by allegrita
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 7:01 pm
by francis
*setting up a trust fund for Lilly so Lucky can go on writing and has a formidable beta.*
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 7:05 pm
by Lilly
Thank you,
Albra and
Alle and
francis.
I do suffer so for the sake of the prose...
She makes me read about
Josef -- ALL of the time.
...snarking, biting, turning on the vamp charm, while in various states of undress... I'm asking you, how much can one woman be expected to take??
But I will endeavor to carry on -- for your sakes.
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:49 pm
by MoonShadow
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:05 pm
by jen
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:28 pm
by librarian_7
Lilly wrote:Thank you,
Albra and
Alle and
francis.
I do suffer so for the sake of the prose...
She makes me read about
Josef -- ALL of the time.
...snarking, biting, turning on the vamp charm, while in various states of undress... I'm asking you, how much can one woman be expected to take??
But I will endeavor to carry on -- for your sakes.
My beta...she's selfless, that way.
I'll just have to think of more various states of undress...
Lucky
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:32 pm
by Lilly
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:52 pm
by jen
This was a reread but it drew me right in.
Josef's trademark snark was perfectly en tact. His memory, not so much.
I really hope there is another part to this. It is fabulous!!!
Thanks, Lucky!
Jenna
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:38 am
by librarian_7
Well, jen, I have started a new part to this, but I'm probably not going to finish it anytime soon. Too many irons in the fire.
On the other hand, don't rule it out...I'll probably get around to it one of these days.
Lucky
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:30 am
by tucutecats
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:07 am
by Moonlighter
Oh, Lucky -- you just have to find the time to continue this little gem!! Even if you only make it into a two-parter, it will be worth it just to find out what in the world happened to Josef!! I love that he forgets almost everything except his suit and car preferences. 
Oh, and that Nagano kid. And slugging down a glass of blood without total recall that he is, in fact, a vampire is amazing. How about a conclusion for Mick's sake -- he can't leave this mystery unsolved, can he? 
Of course not!
Super story as it is, though. Thanks!
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:41 pm
by jen
This is amazing!
And another chapter is totally worth waiting for!!!
Thank you!!
Jenna
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 1:19 pm
by coco
Fabulous snarky Josef even without his memory.
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 3:10 pm
by maggatha3
Josef Konstan...some kind of vampire? Well, the best kind, dear, the best!
Will you give us some more, Lucky? Josef and Mick in that situation...begging you
Re: Knock, Knock (Challenge #114, First Lines) (PG-13)
Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 3:38 pm
by tucutecats
Ok just read this for the second time,loved it as much as I did before. I know we're greedy but more please , this is such an intriquing story, you know I love your writing, and I always want more
