The End of Dreams (one-shot, M, J, darkfic, PG-13)

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:08 pm

And this

is for you, dear Jo. Thanks so much - I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.

And that's an interesting thought for another one. Mmmmm must think on that.

Red

jen · Post by **jen** » Sat Apr 25, 2009 11:55 pm

Wow.

Forget the tissues, I need a towel.

You are amazingly talented. That was absolutely lovely!

Thank you.

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 12:09 am

Thank you, jen, for the read and the lovely comment.

Red

Luxe de Luxe · Post by **Luxe de Luxe** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 12:29 am

simply stunned by this. the early line about vulnerability being private really got me in.. and that was just the beginning of the raw emotional honesty of this piece.

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:46 pm

Many thanks, Luxe. That's just lovely.

Red

Kelly · Post by **Kelly** » Tue Apr 28, 2009 6:04 pm

That was wonderful, Red...just wonderful

I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time.

Well done!

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:16 am

Kelly wrote: That was wonderful, Red...just wonderful

I haven't been this affected by a story in a long time. Well done!

Thanks, Kelly.

*offers Kel a hankie*

Red

greenleaf9 · Post by **greenleaf9** » Thu May 14, 2009 12:14 am

red,

right now, the only thing my stunned and blown mind can think to comment on is the decency of the cemetary caretaker. What an inherently decent thing to do, to let Mick stay, and to refuse Josef's money.

I'll be back with a longer comment later. Once I can actually process this amazing story.

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Thu May 14, 2009 10:30 pm

Thanks, gl9, the caretaker was a little ray of decency amid the gloom.

Red

Albra · Post by **Albra** » Fri May 15, 2009 6:22 pm

I'm speechless ... I'm touched... I'm weeping ...
And first of all - I'm pondering ...
This last thing - your talent to force readers to pondering - makes your writing such good ...

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Fri May 15, 2009 8:02 pm

Albra, I'm always so happy to see a comment from you, and I love that you were touched and that this piece made you ponder. Thank you.

Red

Albra · Post by **Albra** » Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:30 pm

I knew how it will end for me

but I'm back - with big box of tissues.
One more time - Thank you

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:30 am

and

Thanks, Albra.

A re-read is so very precious.

Red

AussieJo · Post by **AussieJo** » Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:29 pm

Just reread it.... Red!

Still beautifully written, desperately sad,

but showing so much love.

redwinter101 · Post by **redwinter101** » Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:14 pm

Re-reads are SO lovely. Thanks, AussieJo.

Red

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