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Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:48 pm
by Luxe de Luxe
Back for a re-read from Coffee House, Red.
Fluff? You think this is fluff? Pfft. Darling girl, I don't think you could write 'fluff' if you tried. Every story you write is imbued with the most delicate threads of complexity, this one no less than every other.
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:10 am
by redwinter101
Oh,
francis.

I've said it before, but it always bears repeating - I'm keeping you.
Luxe, I just spend waaaaaaaay too much time thinking about Mick.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:15 pm
by Moonlighter
Oh wow, Red. Here I come, late again. I need to visit this Coffee House -- maybe I will be on time to read these beautiful pieces.
I can't say anything more complimentary than what's been said, other than to add that after I read the title (on a nudge from comments in The Quality of Mercy) I remember being on a quiet street with overhead powerlines, and hearing the distinctive, constant hum of the electricity flowing through them. This put me right back there in that moment as I could feel Mick's hum of life throughout the whole piece. And you can evoke those feelings with the best of them, Red! As a die-hard MickBeth shipper, I just adored this and anytime Mick's happy, I'm happy.
Thank you for creating such a beautiful world to lose myself in!
for Red!
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 3:13 pm
by redwinter101
Red
Moonlighter.
I'm so happy to see you, sweetie - thanks for reading and the lovely comment. Imagine what those power lines would feel/sound like with vamp senses - that was definitely what I was trying to get across here.
Red

Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 4:42 pm
by RangerCM
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:56 pm
by redwinter101
Happy Mick makes me happy too,
Ranger (despite the amount of time I spend conjuring up various miseries for the poor guy).
And this:
RangerCM wrote:If I'm too busy to fit a new Redwinter story into my day....then obviously I need to rethink my priorities!
just made me grin like a loon.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:11 am
by cassysj
I'm here from the Coffee House. I have to echo Ranger in you have to be in a happy place to review your life so objectively.
This is really a beautiful piece.
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:34 am
by redwinter101
Thank you so much, Carol.
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:51 am
by lila
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. What more can I say?
...Oh, yes, melancholic! And beautiful. Did I say that already?
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 7:50 am
by redwinter101
Ahem. Thanks,
lila - just a little overjoyed to see you!!!
Red
Re: Hum (PG)
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:24 pm
by jen
Fabulous.
Everyone else said it better than I can.
Truly lovely!
Thank you
Jenna
