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Note: This is from Mick's POV, and I'm sure you already guessed the scene from the title.
Lots of thanks to Allegrita for giving me the feedback I so needed!
Enjoy!
A thing for vampires
"Obviously she had a thing for vampires."
"Yeah, I guess they're back in style."
Well, technically, YOU brought them back in style...
When you saw the bite marks on the dead girl's neck... from 30 yards away, I felt awe just shooting through you.
And hope shooting through me... "You know, some people actually find them attractive."
"Really?!?!?"
Crap; that felt more like getting shot.
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edited to fix typo.
A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)
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A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)
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Re: A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)
Poor Mick. She really shot him down, didn't she?! (Sorry, I couldn't resist.)
How so fun to "hear" Mick's thoughts between the lines of that encounter with Beth. (And Beth--how could you say "Really??!!" like that???? Silly woman! )
How so fun to "hear" Mick's thoughts between the lines of that encounter with Beth. (And Beth--how could you say "Really??!!" like that???? Silly woman! )
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Re: A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)
Great between the lines. Mick sure did seem deflated when Beth said "Really?"
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Re: A thing for vampires (G) Chall#159 (Seven Sentences)
I don't blame you!allegrita wrote: She really shot him down, didn't she?! (Sorry, I couldn't resist.)
Yes he did didn't he? From the mouths of babes... I really like that scene because it's got that fun Moonlight lightness to it, and at the same time it shows Mick's predicament so well. He just can't help hoping.MickLifeCrisis wrote:Mick sure did seem deflated when Beth said "Really?"
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