Be Careful What You Wish For - Champagne Chall. #178 - PG-13
Posted: Sun Jun 09, 2019 3:23 am
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Author's note: Written for the "Star Light, Star Bright" Champagne Challenge, #178. Rated PG-13.
Be Careful What You Wish For
“Star light, star bright,” Ray said. We were forking up a dinner of tasteless K rations, sitting on the ground next to a Jeep, somewhere in Italy.
I looked up. “Whatcha wishin’ for?”
Ray grinned, his cheeks going red. “Wouldn’t you like to know.”
I chuckled. He had been missing Lilah like crazy. He had this wistful look on his face as he gazed up at the darkening sky.
“I want a wish, too,” I said. “Someday, I want to find a girl who’ll love me the way Lilah loves you.”
“Man, I hope you do,” Ray said. “She’s one in a million, Mick.”
Ten months later, I was lying on the grass in Ray’s back yard with my head in Lilah’s lap.
“Star light, star bright,” Lilah said. There was a little catch in her voice.
I reached up to cup her cheek. It was wet. “I miss him too, honey,” I said. “If I could trade places with him, I’d do it in a heartbeat.”
“I know. I just… I’m not sorry about us, Mick, honest. But I miss him so damn much,” she said.
Three months after that, she got her wish.
Damn star, anyway.
Author's note: Written for the "Star Light, Star Bright" Champagne Challenge, #178. Rated PG-13.
Be Careful What You Wish For
“Star light, star bright,” Ray said. We were forking up a dinner of tasteless K rations, sitting on the ground next to a Jeep, somewhere in Italy.
I looked up. “Whatcha wishin’ for?”
Ray grinned, his cheeks going red. “Wouldn’t you like to know.”
I chuckled. He had been missing Lilah like crazy. He had this wistful look on his face as he gazed up at the darkening sky.
“I want a wish, too,” I said. “Someday, I want to find a girl who’ll love me the way Lilah loves you.”
“Man, I hope you do,” Ray said. “She’s one in a million, Mick.”
Ten months later, I was lying on the grass in Ray’s back yard with my head in Lilah’s lap.
“Star light, star bright,” Lilah said. There was a little catch in her voice.
I reached up to cup her cheek. It was wet. “I miss him too, honey,” I said. “If I could trade places with him, I’d do it in a heartbeat.”
“I know. I just… I’m not sorry about us, Mick, honest. But I miss him so damn much,” she said.
Three months after that, she got her wish.
Damn star, anyway.
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This goes to prove that you don't need a million words to say something powerful Alle. It's beautifully timed. I love it. Thank you for sharing! And woo for your muse!! 
This little voiceover came to me one evening, and I hurried to write it down before it floated away. I see it as taking place a few years after Ray came back, but long before Mick met Coraline. I figure he had a few years when he felt pretty hopeless about ever finding happiness. So by the time he met Coraline, he was ripe to be swept off his feet, so to speak... poor guy. 
