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Join Me - PG

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 5:25 am
by PNWgal
Drabbles are fun... ;-)



I wanna be close to you….


Christ, she’s so close I can hear her blood whispering to me. I’m tired of fighting her, tired of fighting this need to touch her, to be near her. She’s warm and she wants me—no, I can’t, I can’t. It’s the Crystal…it’d be wrong to take her …but she didn’t go to Josh, she came to ME and I want her, oh god I’d trade eternity for one taste of those soft lips. Just a taste, just a kiss and I’ll gladly go to hell for it…no…oh no…


Come on, Mick…join me…

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 5:32 am
by wpgrace
More likely, particularly the protective of Mick part, what he WAS thinking than what he drifted-off into in The Proposal... but is it wrong that I like his little demented day dream in that one so much?

ETA: Ok weirdly I wrote this for the drabble about Josef... how did it end up in this thread?

I have now read Join Me... and this comment does not apply... but I like Beth's thinking and Mick's reaction to it...

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:30 pm
by Fleur de Lisa
Amazing how you can put so much longing and desire in so few words.

I always wished they would have gone back to that scene, maybe in a flashback sequence, to show Mick's thoughts and the struggling he must have gone through.

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 4:36 pm
by coco
I like this one very much :mrgreen:

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 6:53 pm
by starbucksjunkie
Still so intriguing, this one. ;)

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:18 am
by mitzie
Very passionate drabble!! Loved it!!!! 8-)

mitzie

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 7:05 am
by janicevictoria
Fleur de Lisa wrote:Amazing how you can put so much longing and desire in so few words.

I always wished they would have gone back to that scene, maybe in a flashback sequence, to show Mick's thoughts and the struggling he must have gone through.
Yes, what Fleur said :yahoo: Have you ever thought of writing a longer version of this one? I'd love to follow Mick through the rest of that evening and the conflict and desire he must have had inside him :wave:

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 2:27 pm
by francis
Oh, how nice that this one popped up in Active Topics. I haven't read it in a while. I love this little glimpse into his soul. And Alex managed to make me really feel for him, really see what Mick went through without uttering a word. You did well in showing this. It could have been a voiceover.

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:06 pm
by Moonlightsonata
I hadn't read this before. This was great and I can still picture and hear in my mind Beth saying it. And the shower scene that followed was about the hottest thing I have ever seen where two people were fully clothed. Thanks.

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:59 pm
by maggatha3
So great PNWgal, so much love, lust and inner conflict in a few words... I have always thought how different the story would have been, had Mick given in that night...!

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:08 pm
by Lucy
WOW, now this was the right idea.....MICK, you won...Josh lost.....now carry the ball and make a touchdown.

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:27 pm
by nutmegger911
This is exquisite! It follows along perfectly with the body language in that scene - right down to the instant he started to crumble and lean in to take what was offered. :clapping:

(How did I miss this?)

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:35 pm
by PNWgal
maggatha, no matter how many times I watch that, it never ends the way I want it to. Thanks for reading! :hearts:

LOL, Lucy... ;)

Thank you so much, NM. :rose: You KNOW Mick had to be tempted - I always wondered what would have happened if Beth hadn't pulled away. ;)

Re: Join Me - PG

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:47 pm
by nutmegger911
Wondered... fantasized... Potato... po- tah- to

I guess I could say the same. :snicker: