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Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:09 am
by heartagram_lala
[x]Title: Blood, Sweat and Tears.
[x]Author: Heartagram_LaLa
[x]Rating: PG-M
[x]Warning: None
[x]Pairing: Mick/Beth
[x]Genre: urm... fluff/smut?
[x]Words: 253
[x]Spoilers: None
[x]Summary: 2 instances in which there was blood, sweat and tears, in Mick and Beth's relationship.
[x]Disclaimer: Not my toys, im just borrowing them =D


There was blood as Mick sank his fangs into Beth’s offered neck. He had held back as long as he could, but as he felt his approaching orgasm, and the pulsing of the blonde’s body beneath him, he gave in and bit.

There was sweat clinging to their bodies, coating them in a thin shine and acting as a natural lubricant, allowing their skin to slip and slide over and against each other lusciously.

There were tears slipping from Beth’s eyes as Mick stared into them. Tears of love and happiness when she realised that this time he wasn’t going to pull away and give her some reason as to why they wouldn’t, and couldn’t, work. That this time he was going to give in to his and her want and need.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~


There was blood, and lots of it, approximately 6 quarts of it in fact. Being sucked from Beth’s body and swallowed hungrily by her lover. And then there was the blood given, the taste barely registered in her mind as she slipped into darkness.

There was sweat coating Mick’s brow as he paced the foot of the bed waiting. Every one of his heightened senses trained on the blonde on his bed, waiting for the smallest sign of life from her deathly still body.

There were tears of joy when Mick saw Beth open her eyes, and he saw that they were an icy blue, he gasped and muttered, “it worked” before gladly allowing his hungry fledgling to feed from him.


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Comments feed my muse!

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 7:38 pm
by francis
I love the juxtaposition of their first time of Beth feeding Mick, and the last time so to speak, because after turning she won't be able to feed him anymore. Love the sweat and tears reference, too. Nice take on their relationship.

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:48 am
by mitzie
Loved this one! Very intense!! Wonderfully written turning scene!!!

mitzie

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 9:36 am
by heartagram_lala
francis wrote:I love the juxtaposition of their first time of Beth feeding Mick, and the last time so to speak, because after turning she won't be able to feed him anymore. Love the sweat and tears reference, too. Nice take on their relationship.
Thanks =D Yeah i have a thing for juxtaposition, its fun =P and it makes for an easy before and after fic =D

Glad you liked, thanks for the comment!

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 9:37 am
by heartagram_lala
mitzie wrote:Loved this one! Very intense!! Wonderfully written turning scene!!!

mitzie
thanks, i'm glad you like the simplicity =D

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:11 pm
by Moonlighter
I liked that turning -- no overblown drama!! Nice.

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:51 am
by heartagram_lala
Moonlighter wrote:I liked that turning -- no overblown drama!! Nice.
thanks =D

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:54 am
by jenstc2003
Very nice LaLa!!! *Grins* I especially love the turning, BTW! Somehow I can just see that smile on his face when she woke up!

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 5:40 pm
by heartagram_lala
jenstc2003 wrote:Very nice LaLa!!! *Grins* I especially love the turning, BTW! Somehow I can just see that smile on his face when she woke up!
Thanks =D and I agree, i'm sure it would be one of his killer smiles!!!

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 11:47 pm
by jen
Awwwww. Lovely!

Happy sigh.

:hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 3:02 am
by heartagram_lala
jen wrote:Awwwww. Lovely!

Happy sigh.

:hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:
Thank you :hearts:

Re: Blood, Sweat and Tears - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 11:23 pm
by loveyoumick
Nice one, the two different moments were good compared. And the end makes me happy. :hearts: