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Spotless - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:13 am
by heartagram_lala
[x]Title: Spotless
[x]Author: Heartagram_LaLa
[x]Rating: PG
[x]Warning: None
[x]Pairing: Mick/Beth
[x]Prompt: Table 3 #8 - Spotless @ 10_prompts
[x]Genre:
[x]Words: 274
[x]Spoilers: None
[x]Summary: Beth's thoughts about why Mick keeps his apartment so neat
[x]Disclaimer: Not my toys, im just borrowing them =D


The first thing Beth had noticed about Mick’s apartment, was that it was spotless.

Everything was in order, all the books were neatly stacked on shelves (in alphabetical order, by author), there were no clothes lying around on the floor, the glasses in the kitchen were organized in order of size, and even the cushions on the couch were symmetrically arranged at either end.

Beth never thought to ask Mick why his apartment was this way because she already knew the answer, she knew it wasn’t OCD or a fear of untidiness, no it stemmed from something much darker.

He kept his apartment in check because he could. He could control everything in it. If something was out of place he could and would put it right. If something needed a place to call home he found it one.

Beth knew that he did this because he felt his apartment was the only thing in his life he could control.

He couldn’t control the weather nor time, he couldn’t control the people around him or what they did, and he definitely felt like he couldn’t control the monster in himself.

Beth knew, that the control over his apartment was a substitute for his feeling of being unable to control his dark side.

But Beth also knew that if Mick wanted he could let his apartment go wild. He could have clothes hanging off the stairs, books strewn across the floor, empty glasses that once held blood cluttering the coffee table.

Because Beth knew that Mick could and did control the monster inside him.

Just because he couldn’t see it, didn’t mean it wasn’t true.

Re: Spotless - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 10:32 pm
by Moonlighter
Wow! I liked that. Really insightful of Beth. Those reporter instincts are not wasted.

Re: Spotless - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 12:25 pm
by heartagram_lala
Moonlighter wrote:Wow! I liked that. Really insightful of Beth. Those reporter instincts are not wasted.
Ta, and yeah i think Beth sees a lot more of Mick then Mick realises, he can't hide from her thats for sure!

Thanks for the comment :yahoo:

Re: Spotless - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT

Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 5:57 pm
by Moonlighter
heartagram_lala wrote:
Moonlighter wrote:Wow! I liked that. Really insightful of Beth. Those reporter instincts are not wasted.
Ta, and yeah i think Beth sees a lot more of Mick then Mick realises, he can't hide from her thats for sure!

Thanks for the comment :yahoo:
LOL! You're welcome.

Re: Spotless - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 12:08 am
by jen
Beth has quite a bit more figured out about Mick than he things she does. I personally believe Beth is a lot smarter than what we commonly saw. This was very nicely done!

:hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:

Re: Spotless - Mick/Beth - ONESHOT - PG

Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 2:57 am
by heartagram_lala
jen wrote:Beth has quite a bit more figured out about Mick than he things she does. I personally believe Beth is a lot smarter than what we commonly saw. This was very nicely done!

:hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:
ITA i hate that at times they pegged beth as the 'dumb' blonde... when she so wasn't, she knew what was going on! lol

thanks for the comment