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"Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:25 am
by librarian_7
A "between the lines" drabble from Fever.

“No, not yours…”

He needs blood, I can see how much he needs it. Why not mine? I’m here, I’m offering. Why not mine? Does he think I’m afraid? Of course I am, I’m not stupid. But I trust him. I’m not sure why, I just do. I can put my life in his hands, I know it. I know it’s safe. I don’t know how, but it is. If I can believe he needs my blood, I can believe he won’t hurt me. What is he waiting for, why can’t he just take me? Mick—please--


“Not like this.”

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:38 am
by mitzie
Great drabble! Beth the innocent about vampire feelings! Love it!!!!

mitzie

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:14 am
by coco
Fantastic :)
I loved Beth's inner monologue :D

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 4:52 pm
by AggieVamp
Great! I'm with Beth on the inner dialogue - wondering 'why NOT me?'

Karen

and YAY! I'm an INTERN now! :)

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 6:08 pm
by francis
I really like this. We get too much Mick voice over and too few Beth voice over. Her POV is greatly unexplored. I wonder why.

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 6:21 pm
by starbucksjunkie
Great!

Now write the rest of it (what comes after "Not like this . .")!

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 12:43 pm
by susieb
This is wonderful! Beth, acting on gut passion, as usual... but without the whole story. Another "poor Beth" moment for me when re-watching the episode. I so often wish Mick had given her more information all along... but that would have changed the whole series. Another bittersweet moment. Well done! :hearts:

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 4:46 pm
by jen
Lovely

And we all understand Mick's anguished, 'not like this' now. Yet, there was something even more intense and loving in Beth's offering Mick her blood in this desperate situation.

:flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers:

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -PG-13

Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 5:14 pm
by allegrita
I love this, Lucky. Why haven't I commented on it before? I think you've nailed Beth's thoughts here. She doesn't love him yet. But she trusts him utterly. And after this moment, everything will change...

Re: "Not Like This..." Beth POV Between the Lines Drabble -P

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 10:32 pm
by jen
'Not like this...'

That line was so intriguing. One of many little strings left by the wonderful writers that just begged to be explained.

We saw hints, and BOY did we put them together. There should have been a lot of screen time devoted to what Mick meant by that.

Beth's heart filled in the blanks left by what she didn't understand. She was afraid, but she knew one thing--she couldn't let this man die. She just...couldn't.

Thanks, Lucky.

Jenna

:hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: