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Beneath Thundering Stars [Ch. 4 - PG-13]
Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 11:12 pm
by moonsword27
Thank you for your support, but this piece is either in or bears similarity to a piece that is now intended for publication. Again, I appreciate your reviews and for reading!
Re: Beneath Thundering Stars [Ch. 4 - PG-13]
Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:35 pm
by francis
Oh. So she didn't know he was a vampire. What he did to her was mean, sharing her with someone else, biting her without her consent. But he is a fledgling still and hasn't much control. Was he abandoned by his sire? How could he survive until now, and why didn't Lenae realize it? When and how was he turned? Intriguing story.
Re: Beneath Thundering Stars [Ch. 4 - PG-13]
Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:59 am
by moonsword27
No she didn't, and while I will expand more on those questions later she didn't notice because it was a new thing.
I'm glad you're intrigued. Hopefully I can keep your interest.