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Polar Shift (PG-13 max, challenge one shot)

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:25 am
by moonsword27
The little girl stood shivering in her white gown. I held her close, running my fingers through her hair soothingly. She was scared, which w-as fine. I'd had her leave the teddy back in her room so she could focus. Tonight was special, I wanted her to remember each piece of it.

And then there were three.

I look to our guest, smiling into those warm brown eyes, framed by waves of chocolate. The absolute horror, the shock in those eyes cuts into me, but its only a matter of time. We can have a family. We'll be happy, the three of us. Together forever. Just like I'd promised, like we'd wanted.

"It'll work Coraline. You, me, and baby."

Re: Polar Shift (PG-13 max, challenge one shot)

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:28 am
by eris
Short and chilling. Nicely done.

Re: Polar Shift (PG-13 max, challenge one shot)

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:58 am
by moonsword27
Coming from you eris? That means a lot.

Re: Polar Shift (PG-13 max, challenge one shot)

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:46 am
by francis
Oh, intriguing. Very chilling, indeed. I like it.