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Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:13 pm
by redwinter101
Title: Mine
Author: redwinter101
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own Moonlight or any of its characters
Note: Inspired by coco's wonderful vid, Love Song for a Vampire

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For coco



--- Mine ---

His limbs curled around me, a silver stare; possession, passion, desire flowing between us. My love, my everything, my reason.

I am safe here, beyond my imagining.

Brave, bright, beautiful, always a little sad, even in joy. He has cast off his regret and let hope in. He feels the loss just as he revels in the thought of a future. Our future. I don't know what that means any more. I don't care. It will be. We will be.

He has died for me.
He has killed for me.
He lives for me.

My vampire.
He is mine.

Mine.

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:22 pm
by coco
WOW. :hyper: I'm squeeing so very much at home right now (the cat is looking at me like I've lost it :snicker: ).

:thanks: Red. :hearts:

I'm such a massive fan of your work and have been for such a long time so to have something I made inspire you has just made my night. I'm chuffed to bits. :biggrin:
My vampire.
He is mine.
I love this bit. I think this is how Mick makes us all feel. Mick is our vampire and he inspires us all. :heart:

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:24 pm
by wpgrace
I don't know what Coco means by "chuffed" but it must be a good thing, as this little drabble is a great thing...

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:25 pm
by redwinter101
coco, sweetie, I was going to PM you but then I saw you in my office and figured you'd found this already. I'm delighted you liked it - your vid was so beautiful and it just set this train of thought off and running.

My thanks to you for providing the inspiration. :rose:

*loves coco*

Red

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:27 pm
by redwinter101
wpgrace wrote:I don't know what Coco means by "chuffed" but it must be a good thing, as this little drabble is a great thing...
:giggle:

Maybe that one should go in the US/UK English thread. It means very pleased...

Thanks, Grace. :heart:

Red

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:28 pm
by coco
redwinter101 wrote:
wpgrace wrote:I don't know what Coco means by "chuffed" but it must be a good thing, as this little drabble is a great thing...
:giggle:

Maybe that one should go in the US/UK English thread. It means very pleased...

Thanks, Grace. :heart:

Red
Shall I take that one over to that thread? :giggle:

You know me Red - as soon as I see something posted, I'm off like a shot to the office. :snicker:

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:33 pm
by PNWgal
One hundred words of deliciousness, Red...just delightful. :hearts:
He has died for me.
He has killed for me.
He lives for me.
How much do I love that?

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:45 pm
by francis
Wonderful, redwinter. I love the ambivalence Beth recognizes in Mick. He never is only happy, never only sad. And you capture their budding relationship in such a tender and beautiful way. Just great.

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:49 pm
by darkstarrising
Red,

Stunning. Simply stunning. In so few words, a relationship defined.
He has cast off his regret and let hope in.
He has let her in - at last.

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:31 pm
by redwinter101
PNWgal, thank you, sweetie. :rose: I've always seen Mick and Beth as two people who see the reality of each other - including the darkness.

francis, that's so lovely. Thank you, my friend.

dsr, :blushing: "at last" indeed. Imagine the loneliness - and then the relief, the release of finally letting someone into your heart and soul. It makes me sigh.

Red

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 7:02 am
by allegrita
Oh... I watched coco's video and then I saw your comment that it had inspired you... and I came here.

Oh, Red.

This is perfectly beautiful. Yes, exactly--they see the dark and the promise. The sadness and the violence and the tenderness. The passion and the fear. It's part of them, individually and as a couple. And that's what makes them perfect for each other.

This made me cry sad and happy tears for them. My beautiful Beth and Mick... :sigh: :happysigh:

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:13 pm
by MSJ_sunglasses
This is stunning Red :clapping:
redwinter101 wrote:Brave, bright, beautiful, always a little sad
- depicted so wonderfully in your banner too :D

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:22 pm
by Liana
Simply beautiful!!! :rose:
I don't know why, but I thought of their first time while reading.

Really, they do belong to each other! They live through each other! Mick has been living for her for over 23 years, because she simply made him want to live. Beth is alive because Mick lived this long. I can't see any other two people whose fates are more intersected and whose very existence is so much dependent on the existence of the other! They simply won't survive without each other!

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:50 pm
by redwinter101
allegrita wrote:This is perfectly beautiful. Yes, exactly--they see the dark and the promise. The sadness and the violence and the tenderness. The passion and the fear. It's part of them, individually and as a couple. And that's what makes them perfect for each other.
That's so beautiful, alle. I'm tearing up here!

MSJ_s,thank you so much. My banner is also coco's work so she owns at least half of this thread!!!

Liana, thank you. I agree that having finally found each other, neither could be happy apart.

Red

Re: Mine (M/B, G-rated)

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 10:05 pm
by pinkiepie230
Stunning, simply stunning. :thud: