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An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:28 pm
by redwinter101
Title: An Unexpected Gift
Author: redwinter101
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own Moonlight or any of its characters
Note: Written for the two-hour challenge.

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--- An Unexpected Gift ---

It started to spread, belly, muscle, throat, spine, thawing, bringing back to life. Back from the dead, that was how it felt to Mick. So cold for so long, he had forgotten the simple power of warmth to make him feel human again. He tucked his hands under his armpits and curled his feet as close underneath him as he could manage. He winced at the scratchy uniform chafing his thigh; finally he had thawed out enough to feel it.

He pulled the hay closer, tighter, smothering a sneeze. He glanced over to Jack, checking he hadn't disturbed his first decent sleep in weeks. A shaft of moonlight cut across his chubby, not-quite-formed features, picking out an almost-dried tear track. The kid was tough, but everyone had their limits and it was this brief respite from their frozen drudge that had proved his breaking point.

Shorty snored. Loudly. That man had the rare gift of being able to sleep anywhere. Mick smiled, something else he hadn't done for so long it seemed like a lifetime ago. They had stumbled across the barn on their way back from another futile recce for food. If they had managed to find anything of use they would have pressed on to get back to the squad but they knew as soon as they saw it that they couldn't pass up the chance of a warm, comfortable night. The animals were long-since slaughtered but their stalls remained, an unlikely sanctuary. Even the smell was comforting, earthy, real, vibrant, alien to a big-city boy.

Mick shivered as the chill seeped further from his bones, working its way out, making way for heat and life. The stirrings of hunger, old pain, the ache of loneliness, he welcomed them like past lovers, sense memory working its powerful magic. An image, stark and clear, a laughing French girl whose name he remembered only as a string of lilting sounds. Her welcoming body, creamy skin against the rough serge of her mannish pants, callused hands moving against his chest as she spread for him, full of laughter, full of life. A tightening in guts and groin as he ran his hands over his belly, conjuring her whisper, "Viens, mon chéri." Cold, hunger, the relentless whump of shells, all had gathered to render him sexless, lifeless. The joy of desire flowed as he fought with buckles and straps, fumbling, reaching, stroking. He buried his face in the soft hay, stifling his groan as he came. The wave of release flowed through him, reaching from core to tip and he knew that tonight he would dream of a nameless beauty and a warm bed.

He mumbled in protest as Jack shook his shoulder, his whisper an urgent hiss, "Mick! Wake up! Mick."

Mick moaned. His eyes snapped open as he felt the hand clamp over his mouth. "Shhhh!! There's someone coming."

Too-brief sleep cast aside, he tensed, reaching for his rifle, slowly, carefully. He clambered from his nest, inching toward the edge of the stall, Jack a half-step behind. He caught Shorty's eye across the other side of the barn and they stepped forward in unison, a practised drill, expecting the worst. They thought they were far from the nearest German patrol, but they'd been wrong before. They reached the end of the line of stalls and Mick held up his hand; they froze, senses craning. A quiet rustle from just outside the barn door drew their attention and Shorty crossed to Mick's flank. With a nod of understanding they crept forward, weapons gripped in sweaty palms.

The door rattled open, just a foot or so, then closed again and silence fell once more. Forward, step by careful step, peering through the early morning light. The sight by the door stopped them dead. No Germans. No threat. Just a girl, no more than eight, with braids in her hair and summer in her cheeks, placing a basket on the floor of the barn. Startled like a young deer, she jumped up and turned to run. Mick held up his hands, palms out; he knew she wouldn't understand him but he spoke anyway, "It's okay, sweetheart. We're not gonna hurt you."

And then she smiled. A breathtaking, brilliant smile that caught three young soldiers' hearts and imprinted her forever in their memories. She opened the door, turned, waved, and skipped back to the farmhouse, her mission of mercy accomplished. As their fear evaporated, they grabbed the basket, casting aside the red and white checked cloth that had kept its contents safe. Fresh bread, warm from the oven, cheese, an apple and a flask of fresh, aromatic coffee. Giggling like kids at Christmas, they feasted and forgot horrors past, present and future. Sated, they tucked the flask back into the basket, checked their kit and prepared to move out. Mick picked up the cloth to replace it over the basket; as he shook it a scrap of paper fell at his feet. Holding it out to catch the daylight peeking through the door, he saw the girl's face smiling back at him. The photo was at least a couple of years old but it was definitely her. Mick stowed it in his breast pocket, over his heart, safe. A gift given freely, unexpected, welcome, cherished. As they headed out, hugging the treeline, Mick glanced over his shoulder and saw her standing at an upstairs window, waving furiously at the three departing strangers. He returned her wave, with a wistful smile. The nameless Belgian farmgirl who had reminded them all of the kindness of strangers and the power of innocence.

Mick would hold her memory in the dark days to come.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:35 pm
by librarian_7
Beautiful, Red. So evocative of the setting, so moving. Wow.

Lucky

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:38 pm
by JosefsRose
Even in war there is kindness, and this just sums it up. It was a hard time, and Mick suffered through it. Such a small gesture, but all the more meaningful, given the situation.

Jenny

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:42 pm
by RangerCM
Very, very nice. All the little things in life that make us who we are....this one helping to form and shape Mick. <sigh>

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:47 pm
by PNWgal
My grandfather used to tell stories of being in Holland during the War and how little they had. This reminded me so much of those tales.

Amazing how a simple gift of kindness can mean so much and make such an indelible impression.

Just wonderful. :hug:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 11:17 pm
by redwinter101
Thanks, guys. This was fun to write (and note, no heartbreak. Yay me!!!).

Red

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 11:32 pm
by cassysj
It really captured the setting. This was such a surprising story and a truly generous and unexpected gift.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:05 am
by jenstc2003
Absolutely PERFECT Red! I can so see this happening- and there would be nothing any kinder than that under those circumstances. I loved it!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:06 am
by redwinter101
Carol, Jen, thank you both. :heart:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:09 am
by allegrita
Whaddaya mean, no heartbreak?! :hankie: :hankie: You sure know how to tug on my heartstrings hard enough to break my heart... but oh, you do it so beautifully.

This is a lovely glimpse into Mick's past, another little piece of the puzzle that is our reluctant vampire hero of today. What a true gift indeed--warmth, a tiny island of relative safety, and the generosity of strangers. And all summed up in the sunny, open face of a little girl who doesn't even speak his language.

Truly, some gifts are far beyond price.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 12:41 am
by GuardianAngel
Funny, I've been thinking lately of Mick's time fighting in the Ardennes. This was lovely, Red. A reminder that there is beauty, even in the middle of battle.
And then she smiled. A breathtaking, brilliant smile that caught three young soldiers' hearts and imprinted her forever in their memories.
I bet! Sweet innocence amidst death and battle.

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:11 am
by redwinter101
alle, I swear to God, no tears were intended. But it seems I can't help it - even when totally unintentional. There is something about innocence in war that is so out of place - yet somehow so apt.

GA, thank you, sweetie. :hearts:

Red

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:16 am
by Fleur de Lisa
How lovely was this? First of all, to see a glimpse of the young man before his life was altered.
Secondly, because of the beautiful way it was written and gorgeous phrasing, for example:
"with braids in her hair and sunshine in her cheeks"
(it made me nostalgic for Garrison Keillor who describes his young daughter as the 'freckled, sandy-haired girl')

And last, but certainly not least, no one died!!! Yay!!!

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:20 am
by redwinter101
Trust me to need a war story in order to have no-one die. I was always a contrary soul.

*loves Lisa*

Red :heart:

Re: An Unexpected Gift (Mick, PG-13)

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 2:07 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Maybe no heartbreak, but it still made me teary-eyed at the end! Your writing just has that effect on me, Red! This was so sweet. Thanks!