Haze - PG-13

[Fleur de Lisa]

OH MY (forget Bob, I am going for the real big guy here) GOD!!!


This is better than anything I could have imagined when we discussed the whole Mick smoking thing. I have never smoked, but this makes me want to reach out and grab a cig just to latently experience some of this eroticism.

I should have known that you wouldn't just write this as erotic, nope. There is a story here, as always, and that last line is a KILLER. The best line of the month award goes to you, hon.

I am literally shaking while typing this, that is how much this little piece o' Mick affected me.

This is sensuality, pure male sex and eroticism wrapped up in ribbons of truth and foreboding.

Well done, my friend. Well done indeed.

[GuardianAngel]

ROTFL. I was waiting for your response, Lisa.

Of course, it's better than you imagined. It's P-gal!

[Fleur de Lisa]

ROTFL. I was waiting for your response, Lisa.

Of course, it's better than you imagined. It's P-gal!

OMG, GA. I am dying here. Just dying. Can this chick write or what???

This is so damn good, there needs to be a Surgeon General's Warning on it:

Warning: reading this vignette about smoking may cause uncontrollable heart palpatations, erratic breathing and other bodily reactions that are too personal to mention in a public forum.

[PNWgal]

I must confess - I was on pins and needles, waiting to see what you'd think of this, Lisa. Hell, listening to you talk about it last night made it just so easy to fill in the blanks! And - thank GA for the last line. She always knows just how to make my stuff a little bit better.

First I was thinking smoky bars and good booze, but I always figured Mick would have given up the smokes after being Turned, like francis said. I sort of think Coraline would hate the habit, but love the process.

LOL - Fleur and GA, you two are the BEST, true?

[Fleur de Lisa]

I must confess - I was on pins and needles, waiting to see what you'd think of this, Lisa. Hell, listening to you talk about it last night made it just so easy to fill in the blanks! And - thank GA for the last line. She always knows just how to make my stuff a little bit better.

First I was thinking smoky bars and good booze, but I always figured Mick would have given up the smokes after being Turned, like francis said. I sort of think Coraline would hate the habit, but love the process.

LOL - Fleur and GA, you two are the BEST, true?

It was brilliant. The smoking is so sexy, that it belonged in the bed. Not to mention the timing of it, him smoking back then meant that Cora would have been there.

I am now going to poke you to write about every other little Mick action. Drinking blood, taking a shower (oh, the possibilities there), driving his car (picture those hands grasping the steering wheel, shifting, etc.)

You have created a monster that demands to be fed!

[PNWgal]

LOL, Lisa...a myriad of possbilities.

SOMEONE I know started a one-shot of Mick working on Beth's car...

[Fleur de Lisa]

LOL, Lisa...a myriad of possbilities.

SOMEONE I know started a one-shot of Mick working on Beth's car...

Well, you better tell Someone to hurry up and complete that sucker.

Why did you have to even go and mention that? My mind is aflutter with the possiblities of that scenario.
Need a shower. A cold one.

[PNWgal]

LOL, and she's going to KILL me when she sees I've mentioned it.

[Fleur de Lisa]

LOL, and she's going to KILL me when she sees I've mentioned it.

Especially when she hears me bugging her about it!!

[PNWgal]

I think I'm going to hide when she gets back.

[GuardianAngel]

Sounds like a promising one-shot. Wonder who that someone is who's working on it.

[Fleur de Lisa]

Sounds like a promising one-shot. Wonder who that someone is who's working on it.

Hmmmm. I wonder. I just hope that now that the cat's somewhat out of the bag, she is working on it feverishly so that her demanding public can read it very, very soon!

Whoever, she may be........

[PNWgal]

Sounds like a promising one-shot. Wonder who that someone is who's working on it.

I just can't imagine....

[ash]

Smoking in bed is sexy, it just is, terrible habit which i try not to do but there is just something about. Great fic.

[PNWgal]

Thanks, ash - smoking IS a terrible habit, but...I can't help but find it sexy.