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Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 6:05 pm
by cassysj
I do not own any recognizable characters no copyright infringement is intended. This is a depressing story with a hopeful ending.



Beth’s POV


I can’t believe it’s been six months since Mick and I got together. So much has happened. I thought when I gave up my dream of being a reporter that would be the biggest change I would have to make. Six months since the first time we made love. Six months since that awful list arrived on Talbot’s desk. Los Angeles is a war zone for vampires.

It was a brilliant plan of Legion's to out vampires as weapons. Genetically altered humans set on destroying our way of life. Mick has finally agreed to relocate. Josef left weeks ago. Maybe once we’re in New York I can finally convince him to turn me, start our life together forever.


Mick’s POV


It’s been six months since I started to live again and now I have to start over. I managed to stay in Los Angeles for almost ninety years. I know it was naïve but I hoped I’d never have to leave. This city was my only unbroken tie with human Mick. Josef says he prefers the torch bearing mobs to what Legion is doing to us now.

It’s selfish of me to bring Beth to New York. It’s only a temporary safe haven and the deeper she gets into my world the further she’ll be from humanity. I can’t leave her here though. She could be rounded up under guilt by association.

It didn’t seem real to me what was happening until Guillermo was killed trying to sneak into Mexico last week. Seeing what was left of him after the silver and sun I knew I had to leave.

Josef’s right how dare they call us monsters. He says he has a plan once we get out of LA that will protect us and Beth. I don’t know what it is but I just hope we can get out of California.


Josef’s POV

Here I am hiding in a basement in New York. It’s been over 150 years since I’ve had to hide like this. I smuggled most of my girls out of the country with new identities. Mick didn’t believe me when I said they go after our humans. For safe passage to Canada, Logan helped most of the girls get settled. I took three of them with me for the trip to New York since I can’t safely hire any more freshies. Now they refuse to leave me and are currently supporting me since I can’t access any more money until I can get out of the country or prove I'm not a vampire.

Solita is keeping the books at a sleazy nightclub. Tangie is a part-time receptionist and Summer is waiting tables. So help me when I get out of here those girls will never want for anything again. Hopefully I’ll have good news tonight.



Coraline’s POV

It’s been six months since Josef rescued me from Lance. As soon as The Legion went public he needed my research. I’ve spent almost every hour of the day the last six months trying to come up with a synthetic cure for vampirism.

I injected myself six days ago and I still appear human. I have no idea how long it lasts but they release you in three days if you don't die from being chained in the desert with silver.

I’m seeing Josef tonight. If I was successful he promised to turn me back and offer me a sire’s protection from the Duvalls. He knew I’d do this for Mick anyway. Please let Mick be able to get out of Los Angeles.

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 6:15 pm
by wollstonecraft61
Wow, cassy, what an apocalyptic view of what the Legion could do. This is REALLY good! To think Josef has to hide in a basement, living off 3 of his freshies. And the description of how the Legion outs and kills vamps. Hon, you should really do a long version of this story, it's just that fresh in imagination and potential! WOW!!!!

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:12 pm
by cassysj
Thank you. I recently watched The Handmaid's Tale with Natasha Richardson and the idea for this story came a bit from that terrible world they lived in. I had a very clear image of how they killed the vamps and I'll think about doing a longer version.

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:51 pm
by wpgrace
Wonderful and scary, Carol! I can't believe you guys can churn out a story this fast!!! :clapping:

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:30 am
by darkstarrising
Cassie,

this is an intriguing view of what could have happened....none of the wealth and power that Josef had could save him or the others from the madness of prejudice. Wonderfully done. :hearts:

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:29 am
by cassysj
Grace - Thank you. It is a scary thought what the modern torch bearing mob would be.

DSR - Thanks. In particular with Josef because he has so much to lose but I thought his paranoia would at least get him out of immediate danger but NY is not safe for vamps just safer. Mick having never been through a vampire purge would be slow to move.

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:29 am
by allegrita
Cassy, I've read The Handmaid's Tale, and I totally get where you're coming from with The Legion. This is a chilling story, and I agree that it would be wonderful to read an extended version with more detail.

But... :bmoon: WHY did you have to kill Guillermo???? :hankie: :hankie: :hankie: :hankie: :hankie: :hankie:
I mean... it's a great story element, but... :Mickangel:

Bless Tangie, Solita, and Summer. They'll see Josef through.

And Coraline--how lucky for all of them that she had already been experimenting on the Cure!! :gasp:

Awesomely good--I'm so impressed! :hearts:

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 8:50 am
by francis
Oh, cassy, that's fabulous. What an apocalyptic tale! And that they need Coraline now, what a spin. I'm so sad for Guillermo, and I really hope they get out of this. This could be the start to a really great novel. It seems to be Eris' style of story, but you found it first. Go on, explore this!

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:16 pm
by PNWgal
Alle took the words right out of my mouth.

This is a fantastic premise, cassy, and would make a GREAT multi-chapter fic!

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:36 pm
by cassysj
Alle - I know I didn't want to kill G but something had to get Mick off his butt. We know Josef's girls are loyal. They all would have liked to stay with him but transporting ten people is hard in this society. I thought it would be interesting to make Coraline the heroine. She was working on it and Josef is nothing but practical.

francis - Thanks it's a dark tale but I hope interesting. I am taking it further.

PNW - I'm so flattered. Thank you.

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:38 pm
by cassysj
I am going to expand this story and am starting with Josef's Story. It's Called Life After The List and will be several chapters

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Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 5:34 am
by mitzie
Wow--Josef always talking about torch-bearing mobs, a brilliant idea for a story!! Poor Guillermo!! :bmoon: :sigh: Great job!!!! :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :gasp: :eek2: :devil: :fingerscrossed: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :notworthy: :flowers:


mitzie :mooncat:

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 10:52 pm
by Fleur de Lisa
carol~~well done!! Loved the different takes you wrote for each person.

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:25 am
by cassysj
mitzie - This was a pretty dark idea that's gotten darker since I've expanded it.

Fleur - I'm glad you liked the different POV's

Re: Six Months Champagne Challenge (PG13)

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 3:57 pm
by Albra
Great story, Cassysj !
Thank you
:rose:

I must check "Life After The List" ...
:reading: