Another Six Months - PG-13
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
OK, I am going to be greedy...I want more! I know, I'm shameless, but I love this story!!!!!!! I know, we have had pregnant Beth stories, but I love them!!!! Now that Mick is getting into the swing of things, I want more! OK, forgive me! My rant is over!
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Awww...you are an old softy after all....this is sweet, and I love both your stories.....just shows how many dimensions of MickBeth you're able to bring to life
I agree with Red 'waddle-stomped' is great!!
I agree with Red 'waddle-stomped' is great!!
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That was sweet of you to think of us and write this lovely story! Beautiful and real....I love your stories!! sighs.....
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Lovely, PNWgal! Simply lovely!
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
Awee, that's sweet.
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Of course I cheered you on for this one. After you had me so down with the first one? I needed me some fluff PNWgal style.
I thought it was realistic for both Mick and Josef to doubt the parentage at first. I mean, vampires can't have children. But leave it to Mick and Beth to rewrite the rules of vampire love and figure out a way to procreate.
I wanted to smack Mick myself, tell him to grow a pair and get with the program. He'd regret it if he didn't. I was happy when Beth finally read him the riot act.
Lovely ending. Sweet as pie. I'm a happy camper. LOL
I thought it was realistic for both Mick and Josef to doubt the parentage at first. I mean, vampires can't have children. But leave it to Mick and Beth to rewrite the rules of vampire love and figure out a way to procreate.
I wanted to smack Mick myself, tell him to grow a pair and get with the program. He'd regret it if he didn't. I was happy when Beth finally read him the riot act.
Lovely ending. Sweet as pie. I'm a happy camper. LOL
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
So sweet! Waddle-stomp is a good description!! Mick is indeed a man!!! Wonderfully done!!!!
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OMG. I love you.
Just read "Hindsight"--which made me teary-eyed, then read this, which made me teary-eyed for entirely different reasons.
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thanks for this P-gal. I really enjoyed it. The pregnancy is definitely credible. Poor Mick. You do give him a bit of a hard time from time to time. He wouldn't accompany her to any appointments? I'm wondering whether you secretly think he needs a bit of an a$$ whopping, a bit of steel in his spine?
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
waddle-stomp? Ahh.../wipes tears from eyes/ I think I remember doing that a few times...
About time Mick man's up and goes to the dr. with Beth.
About time Mick man's up and goes to the dr. with Beth.
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
After reading Guardian*Angel's new fic "Changing the Rules" over on VLF I just had to come back here for a reread of this one! Still as good as before!
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Yesssss!!!!!
I confess!! I like happy endings things are wrapped up with a big bow, plenty of hearts and flowers and choruses of "Awwwwwwwwwww" and this was absolutely charming.
I'm not saying that that I don't like angst, barriers and obstacles to be overcome along the way but I have a definite preference for happy endings.
You have written two lovely, lovely stories here. Both wonderful reads and very, very well written
I confess!! I like happy endings things are wrapped up with a big bow, plenty of hearts and flowers and choruses of "Awwwwwwwwwww" and this was absolutely charming.
I'm not saying that that I don't like angst, barriers and obstacles to be overcome along the way but I have a definite preference for happy endings.
You have written two lovely, lovely stories here. Both wonderful reads and very, very well written
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
Came by for a reread and was charmed all over again.
I must confess, I want more.
There is lots of territory to still be explored in this lovely little story!
I must confess, I want more.
There is lots of territory to still be explored in this lovely little story!
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Well dammit -- I'm still crying, but for a completely different reason!! This was wonderful, PNWGal. Don't get me wrong -- Hindsight was wonderfully written and you can't get much better praise than knowing you reduced your readers to tears because they felt that deeply about the story, but this was so absolutely sweet that it was the counterpoint to Hindsight. I love them both (but you know me -- this one just a tad more!)
Awesome story, and yeah -- the waddle-stomping visual was hilarious!
Awesome story, and yeah -- the waddle-stomping visual was hilarious!
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Re: Another Six Months - PG-13
Mick thought she cheated on him and forgave her?
1. What a rare man this guy is, I already knew
2. Who would cheat on "this"?
I loved it , gave me a big smile on my face, especially when imagined him entering the maternity clinic
1. What a rare man this guy is, I already knew
2. Who would cheat on "this"?
I loved it , gave me a big smile on my face, especially when imagined him entering the maternity clinic
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