A Hundred Grand--pg13 2 Drabbles

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two little bites of goodness emma-lee. I particularly liked the second, conveying Coraline's sorrow.
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darkstarrising wrote:Emma-Lee,

what a wonderful response to the challenge!! One man's joy at winning 100Gs countered by one woman's sorrow at losing something more precious than money.

Beautifully done!
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allegrita wrote:I like them both individually, Emma-lee, but as a pair they are wonderful because of the contrast between them. Beautifully done!
Thanks Alle. I was hoping the contrast would not be too much.
Luxe de Luxe wrote:two little bites of goodness emma-lee. I particularly liked the second, conveying Coraline's sorrow.
Thank you Luxe. Cora was my favorite one as well....but then i am biased I think Cora was my favorite character on ML. Shhhh don't tell Josef...LOL.
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These are nice. I like the contrast in mood.
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nutmegger911 wrote:These are nice. I like the contrast in mood.
Thank you nutmegger911. I am glad you liked it.
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Wow... Em!

Two incredibly different tones... both utterly marvelous!
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:clapping: I enjoyed these clever drabbles. :clapping:
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wpgrace wrote:Wow... Em!

Two incredibly different tones... both utterly marvelous!
Thanks wpgrace!
Catmoon wrote::clapping: I enjoyed these clever drabbles. :clapping:
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I love both of them!! The contrast between the two is wonderful!! I like the Cora one the best. Great job!!!! :yahoo: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :coffee: :hyper2: :hyper2: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :hankie: :sigh: :yahoo: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :thud: :thud: :heart: :flowers:


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mitzie wrote:I love both of them!! The contrast between the two is wonderful!! I like the Cora one the best. Great job!!!! :yahoo: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :coffee: :hyper2: :hyper2: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :hankie: :sigh: :yahoo: :yahoo: :yahoo: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: :thud: :thud: :heart: :flowers:


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Nice! The poker one was funny. Poor G -- walking right into the lion's den.

The second one...I'm no Coraline fan, so all I could think is "that's what you get" (oooh, harsh, isn't it?) but I am only thankful that she created our beautiful vampire Mick. Sorry, but that's all the sympathy I can muster!
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Moonlighter wrote:Nice! The poker one was funny. Poor G -- walking right into the lion's den.

The second one...I'm no Coraline fan, so all I could think is "that's what you get" (oooh, harsh, isn't it?) but I am only thankful that she created our beautiful vampire Mick. Sorry, but that's all the sympathy I can muster!

Thanks for reading. I love writing Guillermo he is so fun. And Coraline either you hate her or love her..thanks for reading.
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Just revisiting challenges. Poor Guillermo he will never get out of the rematch. Poor Coraline there are a lot of regrets for her.
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cassysj wrote:Just revisiting challenges. Poor Guillermo he will never get out of the rematch. Poor Coraline there are a lot of regrets for her.
Thanks for coming by again. And Yes Cora does have A LOT of regrets and Guillermo is just fun to torment.
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Emma Lee

These are both wonderful!!

Guillermo winning the poker game with Josef was a fluke and while Josef is certain to seek a rematch, not for the money but 'the principle of the thing' I hope he has a change of heart. A hundred thousand dollars is pocket change to Josef. It's probably a lot of money to Guillermo. I hope he has a change of heart but...I doubt it.

The second one is poignant, and shows a Coraline who is not as cold and remorseless as the one we tend to see by default. She recognizes that she made a terrible mistake with Mick. I really hope she manages to learn from it.

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jen wrote:Emma Lee

These are both wonderful!!

Guillermo winning the poker game with Josef was a fluke and while Josef is certain to seek a rematch, not for the money but 'the principle of the thing' I hope he has a change of heart. A hundred thousand dollars is pocket change to Josef. It's probably a lot of money to Guillermo. I hope he has a change of heart but...I doubt it.

The second one is poignant, and shows a Coraline who is not as cold and remorseless as the one we tend to see by default. She recognizes that she made a terrible mistake with Mick. I really hope she manages to learn from it.

Thank you!

Jenna

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Thank you Jenna :heart: Yes I do hope Josef reconsiders but I suspect you are right and that he won't. And that is how I see Coraline as someone who loved Mick very much but went about it the wrong way.
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