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Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 8:57 pm
by cassysj
Here is my slash contribution. Nothing explicit


I do not own any recognizable characters no copyright infringement is intended.



Coraline was getting ready for the party tonight. Her brothers had told her a very important guest was coming and it would be her job to amuse her. Dolores Maxford Whittaker had more than a hundred years on the Duvalls and they had to pay her tribute if they were going to branch out from France to England.

Coraline was fascinated by the respect her brothers showed this woman. The stories she told. Leading a Pirate Army. What kind of a lady was she? Not that Coraline hadn’t shed all proper ladylike behavior but she never had the respect of men.

Coraline was amused. Lance was falling over himself to impress Dolores and she was very bored. Lance was telling her he was in charge of all the vampires in the southern district of Paris and his plans for expansion. In the middle of his story Dolores stood up and said.

"I wish to see the gardens." She pointed at Coraline. " I want that woman to accompany me."

"Coraline attend her." Lance snarled.

Coraline started walking with Dolores and began to describe the various flora.

Dolores kept staring at her with a look of disgust and desire.

"Coraline, why are you subservient to them? The only one who’s your equal is Lance."

"I’m a woman." She answered sadly.

"What do you think I am? You’re a vampire. Sex only matters if you let it."

Coraline looked at this woman and could feel the power emanating from her.

Dolores came to a decision and said.

"My dear, have you ever laid with a man?"

Coraline hesitated. "I am not married." she said indignantly.

"That wasn’t the question. I’ll take your righteous indignation as a yes. Have you laid with a woman as you would a man?"

Coraline shook her head. The thought had never even occurred to her.

"Come to my bedchamber tonight." Dolores said. "I’ll give you an education."



Later that evening.


A new world had opened up for Coraline. Dolores showed her many pleasures that night and told her the first step to being powerful was taking whatever you wanted.

It was one year later she taught Cynthia that lesson.

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 9:03 pm
by redwinter101
cassysj wrote:Dolores showed her many pleasures that night and told her the first step to being powerful was taking whatever you wanted.
Mmm what evil serendipity - a lesson Coraline learned only too well from a woman who later died at Mick's hand.

Red

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 2:33 am
by cassysj
Thanks red. I wanted to do something a little different for the challenge since I've done JOCK before.
I had actually been toying with a Lance/Josef but I just couldn't make it work.

If Lola had known then that Coraline would have wanted a musician who would take her down I don't think they would have had that night.

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:20 am
by francis
Well, that was surely different, very creative. Where would Coraline have learned to be ruthless if not by Lola? I really like this.

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 11:22 am
by Catmoon
Very unique and interesting idea! Just goes to show there are still new pairings to explore. I like how Lola was totally bored with Lance. :snicker:
cassysj wrote:I had actually been toying with a Lance/Josef but I just couldn't make it work.
This made me :rolling: I used to say I could see Josef with anybody. You have now proved me wrong. :no:

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 1:19 am
by cassysj
Catmoon wrote:Very unique and interesting idea! Just goes to show there are still new pairings to explore. I like how Lola was totally bored with Lance. :snicker:
cassysj wrote:I had actually been toying with a Lance/Josef but I just couldn't make it work.
This made me :rolling: I used to say I could see Josef with anybody. You have now proved me wrong. :no:
I tried really hard to make it work with Lance but.... :snicker:


I thought a Lola/Coraline pairing was something new. Thanks.

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:06 am
by Moonlighter
I agree -- pairing Lola and Coraline is new and different. Who would have thought Coraline would have learned her ways at the knee of Lola? Hmmmm.

I had to laugh at Catmoon's comment about not seeing Josef with Lance. Yeah, I can see how that pairing would be difficult, but it lends itself to a whole new challenge topic.....

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:15 am
by cassysj
Moonlighter - It's so nice to see this get a bump. Two very powerful women, one very self-aware and one insecure.

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:19 am
by jenstc2003
WOW! This is extraordinary well done. Not a pairing I had thought of myself, but thinking of it... it makes PERFECT sense. Who better to teach Cora about this sort of thing than the one and only Lola, who I somehow think was never shy about what she wanted, and who knew too well exactly how to make things happen. Look at how she manipulated Josef.

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:12 am
by cassysj
jen - Thanks. Lola was a force of nature and if someone like her taught Coraline about power that would be interesting

Re: Slash Challenge The Power of Lola Lola/Coraline PG-13

Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:40 am
by allegrita
Ooh, I really like this. It's almost like a charcoal or watercolor sketch... you suggest so much, but you don't show us much. What is it the design people say about the use of "negative space"? This story is a perfect illustration of that. It's what you don't say that makes the imagination take flight... :chin: