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Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:43 pm
by Lucy
G rated Not for Guillermo

but for General rating.
Dangerous.....
Stepping out from the shadows at the fountain, talking to the wild child reporter. I knew it would put us on a perilous path to say the least.
Difficult......
Accepting her love face on. Understanding her love IS meant for me, returning my love without endangering her. It's all so....complicated.
Complicated
Taking a drive with the top down, thinking while we enjoy the night air how much I want her with me for now, forever. Knowing when I park the car....it will be in Mrs. Turner's driveway...and I'll be facing her, asking for her daughter's hand.
Dangerous, difficult and complicated. I'm totally dug in, it's just who we are. Anything else wouldn't be our bareboned, unvarnished love.
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:22 pm
by francis
Awww. You give the words Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated new meaning, making it all about Mick's feelings. But it is. I think for Beth it never was as complicated and difficult as it was for Mick. He is so focused on the concept that it can't work. You give him a new perspective. And in so few words. Awesome!

Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:38 pm
by darkstarrising
I'll echo francis.....so few words, yet such an insight in Mick's feelings about Beth and their future.
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:41 pm
by coco
Beautifully done,
Lucy.
To base this around Mick's feelings was inspired.

Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:52 pm
by Luxe de Luxe
wow. short, but, to the point. you've really managed to cut through to the bones of why we all love this show right here, Lucy. really, really well done.
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:04 am
by Lucy
Thank-you, all, ladies....

when Mick speaks...

I have to start typing.
Love,
Lucy
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:13 am
by wpgrace
Well, then please DO keep listening!
I love the ending here... he is gonna face Mrs. T again for the first time in how many years, and thus come clean about who and what he is to her. That is also brave... and shows he has accepted himself at this point. You REALLY got a LOT into those few words.

Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:16 am
by Lucy
wpgrace wrote:Well, then please DO keep listening!
I love the ending here... he is gonna face Mrs. T again for the first time in how many years, and thus come clean about who and what he is to her. That is also brave... and shows he has accepted himself at this point. You REALLY got a LOT into those few words.

I but Q-tips by the 500's (even thought you aren't supposed to put anything smaller than your elbow in your ear....)
Love,
Lucy
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:29 am
by allegrita
Lucy, I'm so glad you're back, and writing again. This is a really poignant (but happy) look at the words from Mick's perspective. Good things do come in small packages!

Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:33 am
by Lucy
allegrita wrote:Lucy, I'm so glad you're back, and writing again. This is a really poignant (but happy) look at the words from Mick's perspective. Good things do come in small packages!

Thank-you!
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:04 am
by MoonlitRose
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:37 am
by cassysj
You've really done a lot with just a few words, I'm glad to see you back. Mick has a wonderful future ahead of him.
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:52 am
by Lucy
YOU are welcome, thanks for the kuddos
L

Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:54 am
by Lucy
cassysj wrote:You've really done a lot with just a few words, I'm glad to see you back. Mick has a wonderful future ahead of him.
Thank-you for the welcome and the kuddos.
L
Re: Challenge #112 - Dangerous, Difficult and Complicated, "G"
Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:33 am
by wollstonecraft61
Oh, Lucy, Mick's love shines through for Beth in your story! To face her mother when he knows she'll recognize him, all because he loves Beth...just beautiful.