Moonlightaholics

coco, jenna

Thank you both for the lovely comments.
College roommates can be very interesting...

I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Lovely reread of this charming little glimpse of Beth's entry into the wide world of college.

We all knew at least one person like Caroline. The rapport between Beth and her Mom is wonderful. You give us enough to tell us that the relationship was warm, nurturing and close. Carl's appearance is a lovely touch, as is his immediate attraction to the superficial, somewhat vapid Caroline.

Then, Mick's appearance--he was watching out for Beth here, too.

Fabulous. You are a marvelous writer, Moonshadow!

Thank you!

Jen,
You are to kind. Your compliments will go straight to my head,

This is delightful!

This is good, people.

She's delighted.

Now if she passes the word on to her muse...

I definitely see Carl the ladies man here. I love revisiting challenges.

I do not remember any maintenance men that were like MSJ! This is a perfect reason for Beth and Carl to know each other so easily.... Great story!

Beth's in college in the same dorm as Carl! That should explain lots of things! I loved the dorm atmosphere with roomies, bad a/c, people coming and going and worried mom in the middle, but I absolutely adored crafty Mick in plain sight checking out on Beth! How come she noticed how handsome Carl looked and not Mick?