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Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:12 am
by MickLifeCrisis
A new 100 word, between the lines drabble for the “Keep It Short” challenge. From the ending of Sonata. You could even consider it Valentine themed.
Disclaimer: I do not own
Moonlight, its characters or any of its dialogue.
Rated: G
Characters: Mick and Beth (as if you didn't know

)
How can you remember that?
How can I remember the moment I let you see me after twenty-two years? I remember everything about you. Your flannel nightgown, your fear and your trust the night I rescued you. The look on your face when I told you I’m a vampire. The trust when I told you how I was turned. Your caress when you called me your guardian angel. The red gown and your happiness when we danced. When you first kissed me. When I first kissed you. Why do I remember all these things? It’s easy.
Because I love you.
And I've just noticed none of my other drabbles ever made it over here! I'll have to remedy that.
Re: Drabble - Sonata (for Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:18 am
by allegrita
Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:38 am
by jen
MickLifeCrisis
This is just lovely!
Of course he remembers! He keeps each and every memory of Beth preserved, They are very precious to him.
In a way the story of Moonlight is so much like the old Greek story of Pygmalion, who created a statute of the perfect woman and then fell in love with his creation. I know, in some ways that doesn't make sense, but I have always thought some of Beth's personality traits come from being watched over all her life.
Happy sigh!
Wonderful!
Jenna

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:14 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Thank you so much
allegrita and
jenna! I'm happy you liked it!
Kind of a mushy one, wasn't it?

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:56 pm
by francis
I love mushy.
This is great!!

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:32 pm
by fairytoes
Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:19 pm
by maggatha3

hey, most men would not even remember half of it...
Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:16 am
by MickLifeCrisis
maggatha3 wrote: 
hey, most men would not even remember half of it...
Mick of course not being like "most men".
Thanks for reading and commenting,
maggatha,
francis and
fairytoes!

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:35 pm
by jen
Wonderful!
And I love mushy, too.
Mushy and Mick.....

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:01 pm
by MickLifeCrisis
Thank you
Moonlighter and
Jen!
Angsty Mick, vampy Mick, mushy Mick... I love them all!

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:07 pm
by jen
Exactly!!!!

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 3:07 am
by cassysj
This sums up Mick's feelings in a nutshell or drabble

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2013 5:35 am
by MickLifeCrisis
Thank you
cassy! Been awhile since I read this one. Thanks for the bump and the comment - I'm glad you liked it!

Re: Drabble - Sonata (G) (Keep It Short Challenge)
Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2022 7:45 am
by allegrita
Aww... I love this one. So very Mick... all those amazing thoughts are running through his mind, and what he says is so simple... but succinct.
