The Sun and the Moon (One-shot) New 1/27/09 PG

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Lucy wrote:you've cast both sides of the "coin" and they are unmistakeably ringing true.....

so bittersweet.

Thank-you :heart:
Lucy, again, thanks....amazing how one event effects two people so differently...
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Re: The Sun and the Moon (One-shot) New 1/27/09 PG

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darkstarrising wrote: For me, Beth is a complex person whose actions (or lack of them) in choosing between Josh and Mick in the series was somewhat disappointing. I have a higher opinion of her than that.
Me too :yes: :yes: :yes:
I like your “expedition” inside Beth mind, this step-by-step analyze of her feelings, her grief.
This is one of those stories, which have influence on my look at particular scene or episode.
Thank you for this, Darkstarrising
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Albra wrote:
darkstarrising wrote: For me, Beth is a complex person whose actions (or lack of them) in choosing between Josh and Mick in the series was somewhat disappointing. I have a higher opinion of her than that.
Me too :yes: :yes: :yes:
I like your “expedition” inside Beth mind, this step-by-step analyze of her feelings, her grief.
This is one of those stories, which have influence on my look at particular scene or episode.
Thank you for this, Darkstarrising
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Thanks, Albra and you're very welcome :hug: :hug: The shock of Josh's murder has begun to wear off and now she must get on with the rest of her life. First, though, she must come to terms with her loss and say good bye, something that is difficult when one you love has died. If you want to see what went on in Mick's mind just before Josh's funeral, see the companion piece

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Re: The Sun and the Moon (One-shot) New 1/27/09 PG

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Karen

Just here for a reread and, although I thought this was fabulous the first time I read it, I believe I got more out of it the second time. I really love the way you write Beth. I, too, feel she had more focus and depth than we saw in that episode. I wondered why they chose to write her that way.

Thank you for providing that depth and perspective.

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