Francis and I just put an updated version of this story on youtube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CW0Ku1OXnY
Don't hesitate to comment if you feel it goes, too fast, too slow, etc, or you think it can be otherwise improved!

And BTW if you want to do something similar and have questions about the process, don't hesitate to ask.

~ end of update! ~
I just realised that I forgot to post the link to this here... so there I go! The third chapter, "Dealing", is at the bottom. Enjoy

http://moonlight-illustrated-fanfics.bl ... ancis.html