That last line is great! Josef didn't try to make a good impression, huh?
The Big Scoop by Ella713 Rated PG
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francis
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Re: The Big Scoop by Ella713 Rated PG
Great storyline, I like that you didn't kill Ben Talbot and Carl but they got a very different treatment. Ben doesn't recall anything, and Carl got the full disclosure.
That last line is great! Josef didn't try to make a good impression, huh?
That last line is great! Josef didn't try to make a good impression, huh?
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MickLifeCrisis
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Re: The Big Scoop by Ella713 Rated PG
Whew! No relocation necessary! A satisfactory ending for all. Well, except for Leonard.
Thanks for the new story Ella!
Thanks for the new story Ella!
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MoonMarg
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Re: The Big Scoop by Ella713 Rated PG
I loved how Carl accepted everthing Mick told him and it didn't worry him at all - Mick and Beth were still good people!