Ditto. This was good, I could feel their emotions, it was almost painful to watch the way they tried to deal with this situation. And Mick certainly learned something from his father there.wpgrace wrote:Awwww!!!! Kelly!!!! You totally got me! I could NOT figure out who they were, but I was so in love with both of them!!!! And only at the end did I know.... Nicely done!!!
And maybe Mick really turned out a lot like his father, and that's why he chose to live the dangerous life with Coraline, while still wanting something different with Beth. He's really complex, and his father must have had some impact. I really think you did well in imagining what he could have been like.