Haze - PG-13

[greenleaf9]

Oooo, PNW--this is wonderful! Damn sexy. I hate cigarettes, but boy--this was niiiiiiiiiice!

Good job! I think you should contract with Fleur and grace more often.

[allegrita]

Pgal, you've done it. You've made the most disgusting thing absolutely, tinglingly, ravishingly sexy. I can see Mick doing exactly those things. My parents both smoked unfiltered Camels, until they switched to unfiltered Pall Malls (because they were LONGER, of course) in the late 60's. I grew up surrounded by, and hating, cigarette smoke--and here's the true irony, my dad worked for the American Cancer Society.

The rituals are perfectly described, the looks are even more smoldering than the cigarette, and the entire (poisoned --sorry, couldn't resist) atmosphere is perfectly noir.

I love this scene. And I'm not kidding you--I'm about as rabid a nonsmoker as you're gonna find. So--wow.

And that last line? You and GA really do make a good team.

[GuardianAngel]

And that last line? You and GA really do make a good team.

Thank you, Alle. Reading that put a big smile on my face. Since working on ATKM together, it's become habit. But it's not like there much to be done to improve on Pgal's stuff.

[Luxe de Luxe]

... his new addiction. Love it. This is such a sensual piece.

[PNWgal]

gl - thank you, baby girl. And...don't give those two any ideas!

Alle...thank you. I mentioned earlier that my dad used to smoke those unfiltered smokes (although I can't believe your dad smoked and worked for the Cancer Society! ). I think it suits the time period and THANK YOU for thinking I hit the nail on the head! And...most of my stuff, I couldn't do without GA (love ya, honey!).

Luxe...thank you so much. I'm thrilled you liked it!

[Fleur de Lisa]

I have decided to read this as least once a day.

Take a multi-vitamin: check
Exercise: check
Read "Haze" and feel like smoke is wafting from my body: che......

[PNWgal]

LOL, Lisa...

[Fleur de Lisa]

I swear to Bob, I just wanna lay/lie/whatever in bed and have someone smoke like that next to me.
A male someone.
A male someone who is a hot vamp.
Named Mick.

Lucky for me that I am not picky, huh?!!

[PNWgal]

LOL, Oh NOOOOO, Lisa...you're not picky AT ALL....

[GuardianAngel]

And...most of my stuff, I couldn't do without GA (love ya, honey!).

Yeah, like you weren't writing long before I came along. But right back attcha, babes - you know I delight in being part of your creative process.


Hey, Lis. I'll send him over when I need a nap. I just bought him a new pack.

[Fleur de Lisa]

And...most of my stuff, I couldn't do without GA (love ya, honey!).

Yeah, like you were writing long before I came along. But right back attcha, babes - you know I delight in being part of your creative process.


Hey, Lis. I'll send him over when I need a nap. I just bought him a new pack.

I never was one for sloppy seconds, but in Mick's case, I will make an exception. Several exceptions in fact

[PNWgal]

And...most of my stuff, I couldn't do without GA (love ya, honey!).

Yeah, like you were writing long before I came along. But right back attcha, babes - you know I delight in being part of your creative process.


Hey, Lis. I'll send him over when I need a nap. I just bought him a new pack.

I never was one for sloppy seconds, but in Mick's case, I will make an exception. Several exceptions in fact

You two...are very very BAD.

[Fleur de Lisa]

Yes we are.

And that's why you love us

[PNWgal]

Of course I do!