The Journey (PG13)
- GuardianAngel
- Courtesan
- Posts: 2455
- Joined: Fri Jan 16, 2009 10:50 pm
- Location: Right here. I think.
The Journey (PG13)
This fic was in answer to a smutless smut challenge.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. They are not mine, never have been, never will be. Bummer, I know.
The Journey
My eyes open slowly. There's warmth and a gratifying sense of contentment. I fell asleep on the couch with Beth. It doesn't happen often. Usually I have to hit the freezer to get some shut-eye. But this was nice. Really nice. She fit into the small space between me and the back cushion perfectly, her head resting in the crook on my arm, her small hand splayed over my chest. I can smell the shampoo she uses, crisp and light. Nothing too sweet or floral for her. I smile. Something else that doesn't happen often. At least not until she walked into my life. Again.
Her hair, which has always reminded me of a halo of sunshine, obscures her face. I can't deny the impulse to move it out of the way. My fingers brush the golden strands behind her ear and then trace the line of her jaw to her lips. I love her mouth. Even in sleep the edges turn upwards in an almost-smile. It opens slightly as my thumb trails below her bottom lip. Her fingers move restlessly and she lets out a soft sigh. It's an invitation I can't refuse. I lean down and capture her mouth with my own. The kiss is soft, unhurried. She sighs into my mouth and I savor it on my tongue.
Her hands are no longer still. They roam and explore knowing just where to linger. I return the favor, fingers dipping and delving. Our bodies slide into each other. Rubbing. Warming.
I ease us into a new position. I want to cover her, look down at her and watch her expressions. My chest aches with pride that the longing I see there is for me. There can be no lies; her heart, her breath, her very blood speak to me, whisper to me her love.
She cradles me as I nestle into her, fill her. Time stretches as our bodies ripple and surge. It's a leisurely climb as we explore every path and foot-hole. No inch is untouched, no moment uncherished. The dusk absorbs our sighs.
As we approach our peek, Beth beckons and I take her blood, warming and filling my body just as she has my soul. Together we reach the pinnacle and leap. Our bodies strain, our holds tighten as we fall in rapture.
We linger in each others arms, too exhausted to move. Beth yawns and nuzzles my neck. Looks like we'll take another nap. This is nice. Really nice.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. They are not mine, never have been, never will be. Bummer, I know.
The Journey
My eyes open slowly. There's warmth and a gratifying sense of contentment. I fell asleep on the couch with Beth. It doesn't happen often. Usually I have to hit the freezer to get some shut-eye. But this was nice. Really nice. She fit into the small space between me and the back cushion perfectly, her head resting in the crook on my arm, her small hand splayed over my chest. I can smell the shampoo she uses, crisp and light. Nothing too sweet or floral for her. I smile. Something else that doesn't happen often. At least not until she walked into my life. Again.
Her hair, which has always reminded me of a halo of sunshine, obscures her face. I can't deny the impulse to move it out of the way. My fingers brush the golden strands behind her ear and then trace the line of her jaw to her lips. I love her mouth. Even in sleep the edges turn upwards in an almost-smile. It opens slightly as my thumb trails below her bottom lip. Her fingers move restlessly and she lets out a soft sigh. It's an invitation I can't refuse. I lean down and capture her mouth with my own. The kiss is soft, unhurried. She sighs into my mouth and I savor it on my tongue.
Her hands are no longer still. They roam and explore knowing just where to linger. I return the favor, fingers dipping and delving. Our bodies slide into each other. Rubbing. Warming.
I ease us into a new position. I want to cover her, look down at her and watch her expressions. My chest aches with pride that the longing I see there is for me. There can be no lies; her heart, her breath, her very blood speak to me, whisper to me her love.
She cradles me as I nestle into her, fill her. Time stretches as our bodies ripple and surge. It's a leisurely climb as we explore every path and foot-hole. No inch is untouched, no moment uncherished. The dusk absorbs our sighs.
As we approach our peek, Beth beckons and I take her blood, warming and filling my body just as she has my soul. Together we reach the pinnacle and leap. Our bodies strain, our holds tighten as we fall in rapture.
We linger in each others arms, too exhausted to move. Beth yawns and nuzzles my neck. Looks like we'll take another nap. This is nice. Really nice.
- francis
- 100% Moonlightaholic
- Posts: 11556
- Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 9:45 am
Re: The Journey (PG13)
Oh, I so love this. It's sensual, touching, warm, tender.
And I love your description of the actual love-making. There's nothing base or crude here.
Thanks.
I can so see them lying there.She fit into the small space between me and the back cushion perfectly, her head resting in the crook on my arm, her small hand splayed over my chest.
And I love your description of the actual love-making. There's nothing base or crude here.
Thanks.
- Fleur de Lisa
- 100% Moonlightaholic
- Posts: 15867
- Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:42 pm
- Location: I wish I may, I wish I might, have the gorgeous man on the right>
Re: The Journey (PG13)
I am going to quote you:
This is nice, really nice.
This is nice, really nice.
- wpgrace
- 100% Moonlightaholic
- Posts: 16429
- Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:25 pm
Re: The Journey (PG13)
Oh I love this one... so like a lazy real life day... and so happy for Mick to have such a moment...

Banner by redwinter101. I miss you, Beloved.
Awesome avatar by the awesome, clever, and gracious Lilly.
If you read a lot of books you are considered well read. But if you watch a lot of TV, you're not considered well viewed. Lilly Tomlin
Grateful to Alex for Mick, Andy, and McG.

- Raven
- Fledgling
- Posts: 407
- Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:33 pm
Re: The Journey (PG13)
That was a lovely interlude, unhurried yet passionate.
Well done, GA.
Well done, GA.

Thank you TugaFanatic for my brilliant avi.
Thank you moonnoir for my wonderful banner.
- GuardianAngel
- Courtesan
- Posts: 2455
- Joined: Fri Jan 16, 2009 10:50 pm
- Location: Right here. I think.
Re: The Journey (PG13)
francis: I love you. I just LOVE you. Thanks for requesting this. I'm thrilled that you enjoy it.
Lisa: I want Mick to have these nice moments in the worst way. I'm glad you concur.
grace: Me too. It makes me happy for Mick to have such a moment.
Raven: Thanks! I'm glad the feeling I was going for came across. Unhurried is exactly it.
Lisa: I want Mick to have these nice moments in the worst way. I'm glad you concur.
grace: Me too. It makes me happy for Mick to have such a moment.
Raven: Thanks! I'm glad the feeling I was going for came across. Unhurried is exactly it.
-
- Courtesan
- Posts: 2911
- Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 1:39 am
- Location: Somewhere in Moonlight land...
Re: The Journey (PG13)
Lovely! Unhurried, serene and sensual!!
mitzie
mitzie
- coco
- Cleaner
- Posts: 6983
- Joined: Fri Jan 16, 2009 6:17 pm
- Location: In my own little corner of Moonlight heaven :)
- Contact:
Re: The Journey (PG13)
GA I read this with the biggest smile on my face. I adore this 

coco's Fan Vids/coco's Graphic Art

Avi by TugaFanatic & banner by me. Thank you.
"Maybe it was her blood in my veins that let me feel her. The beating of her very living heart. Or maybe, we've always been connected." Mick & Beth - Moonlight
coco's YT channel
coco's Vimeo channel
100% Moonlight Tumblr


Avi by TugaFanatic & banner by me. Thank you.
"Maybe it was her blood in my veins that let me feel her. The beating of her very living heart. Or maybe, we've always been connected." Mick & Beth - Moonlight
coco's YT channel
coco's Vimeo channel
100% Moonlight Tumblr

- starbucksjunkie
- Logan's WoW nemesis
- Posts: 502
- Joined: Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:51 pm
- Location: Home drinking my own Starbucks and watching my DVDs. There's a recession on!
Re: The Journey (PG13)
I love your love scenes, GA. Beautiful, sensuous, just a touch of eroticism. Like a canvas painted in broad strokes.
Just lovely.
Just lovely.

"There is a degree to which . . . all literature, highbrow or low, from the Aeneid onward, is fan fiction . . . retelling and reimagining the stories that were told before us and that we have come of age loving--amateurs--we proceed, seeking out the blank places in the map that our favorite writers . . . have left for us . . ." -- Michael Chabon, Maps and Legends
- Kelly
- Rogue vampire
- Posts: 1510
- Joined: Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:44 pm
- Location: Lost in a daydream...I think Alex is in here somewhere too.
- Contact:
Re: The Journey (PG13)
This was lovely...so very lovely.
Well done!


Thanks SirenSong for the gorgeous MickCora tag

"Life is measured not by the number of breaths you take,
but rather by the number of moments that take your breath away.
- Albra
- Logan's WoW nemesis
- Posts: 717
- Joined: Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:13 pm
- Location: Poland
Re: The Journey (PG13)
I love this ... romantic, affectionate, warm ...
Thank you
Thank you
- jmc
- Rogue vampire
- Posts: 1815
- Joined: Tue Jan 20, 2009 3:45 pm
- Location: Michigan
Re: The Journey (PG13)
This is just perfect.
Thank you.
What a lovely idea.GuardianAngel wrote:Beth yawns and nuzzles my neck. Looks like we'll take another nap.


. . . Love is strong as death . . . - Song of Solomon 8: 6
"fiercely faithful"
My beautiful MickBeth avatar by Twilightdew. My beautiful banner courtesy of the very talented Phoenix.
- helloeeze
- Logan's WoW nemesis
- Posts: 619
- Joined: Tue May 19, 2009 4:25 am
Re: The Journey (PG13)
I liked the fact that it made Mick so satisfied to know he slept through the night with Beth and the couch and how much it meant to him. So sweet is our vampire.
-
- Cleaner
- Posts: 6411
- Joined: Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:11 am
Re: The Journey (PG13)
Oh, GA
Happy sigh.

Happy sigh.




Mick and Beth--two of the lovely faces of Moonlight

Beautiful banner by the Fabulous Phoenix

Beautiful banner by the Fabulous Phoenix
-
- Cleaner
- Posts: 6411
- Joined: Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:11 am
Re: The Journey (PG13)
Should have reread this months ago.
Lovely, lovely piece.
Thanks!
Jenna
Lovely, lovely piece.
Thanks!
Jenna
Mick and Beth--two of the lovely faces of Moonlight

Beautiful banner by the Fabulous Phoenix

Beautiful banner by the Fabulous Phoenix